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Two women out for the evening, one predator and one prey, their fates intertwined in more than one way.
7K words. Something a little lighter, fluffier than my usual works.
Posted by Kasra 3 years ago Report
Really nice work! The pleasant-but-tense conversation between these two was a delight to read through, and the "of course this is how it turned out" at the end was great too. Very nice work!
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Posted by ObsidianSnake 3 years ago Report
Thank you!
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Posted by Randomness 2 years ago Report
Wonderful job, as always. Loved the little connection between the two at the end, even with -SPOILERS-
Jhanfyr offering the position transfer with no hard feelings. Unexpected and quite sweet.
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Posted by ObsidianSnake 2 years ago Report
Thank you kindly. This was actually directly based on one of your prompts from a while back!
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Posted by FirstOf71st 2 years ago Report
Lighter and fluffier indeed. Just a slice of life in Verria, and it works. Nothing more to say, so, I'll just give my favorite line, again at the risk of SPOILERS:
“Oh? You think my pads are warm?” Jhanfyr winked. “I have someplace much warmer for you to go.”
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Posted by ObsidianSnake 2 years ago Report
Thanks! (I want to touch her pads, too...)
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