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This version of the story is a little different mostly because of the vore, but I also change the conversation and attitude a bit to be cruller in this version of the world. The story is grim so I put a warning at the beginning.
It's been a while since I posted a story. If I remember correctly my last story was around December 2019 so it's been more than a year. I do hope to make some more but, I also said that last time and that didn't go as planned.
if I end up doing more stories then it will most likely be Touhou and uncommon preds, also there's a high chance for another character from the jobless reincarnation and Miss caretaker.
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Posted by Bobrocks 3 years ago Report
What a bitch.
Posted by VAddict 3 years ago Report
What a bitch indeed. I always liked cruel preds and because of that, I end up making characters harsher than they are in the original story. So when I was dealing with a character who has a bit of a violent streak I change that to her being merciless.
She isn't as cruel in the original story, but she did punch and then beat Rudeus when he was on the floor. however, I think that because of her being young and entitled.
Posted by nick222238 3 years ago Report
He wasn't able to use magic?
Posted by VAddict 3 years ago Report
I knew I forgot to add something. I did have a few ideas when dealing with his magic, but I forgot to add the ideas to the story. Thank you for asking about it, the next thing I'll do is correct the mistake and upload a version with magic.
The main idea was that when he was knocked on his knees he was going to try and use some magic to push her away. But by the time he tried, she would have kicked him. He would use magic when she started eating him and Ghislaine would be the one to stop him, and that leads to him asking for help. for when he was in the stomach I should have mentioned that he was unable to use magic inside.