In this version, Rudeus tries to use his magic. After posting the story nick222238 mention why he didn't use magic and I realised that I completely forgot about the parts I was going to make for the magic. I also made some changes to the story by adding more and fixing some mistakes I made but other than that it's the same story.

I don't know if I should keep the old one or not so, for now, I'll put the old one in scrapbook mode.

For those who want to know when I first came up with the idea, it was going to play out like in the original. The difference only came in when Rudeus uses his magic. instead, Eris would get one more hit that knocks him out and from there she eats him.

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