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Sorority Soiree [FFF/MMM vore] By BunnyWrites -- Report

A sorority prepare for their annual hazing ritual of shrinking down a class of naive boys, taking them home, and playing with them in every manner their depraved imaginations can devise.

This story is a commission for  nosuspicious and is set in the same universe as The Shrink (https://aryion.com/g4/view/669969).

My commissions are currently open, but beware the current queue involves a 3 month wait. I don't charge anything just for reserving a slot though, so if any readers think they might be interested in having me write something for them in future you then can get in touch here or on Discord (BunnyWrites#4146).

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nosuspicious

Posted by nosuspicious 5 months ago Report

There are three kinds of story ideas: ones you don't like enough to write, ones you do like enough to write, and ones you love so much that you have to bring them to BunnyWrites <3

Every step of the commissioning process was such a delight, I loved seeing your imagination run wild as the sorority's antics got more and more crazy and sadistic. Absolutely spectacular work!

BunnyWrites

Posted by BunnyWrites 5 months ago Report

Awww thank you! You're always so fun to write for, you come up with the best ideas and are always so helpful with the feedback <3

Trebortron3

Posted by Trebortron3 5 months ago Report

Thanks for commissioning this one, it was a fantastic read! Can I ask what some of your other ideas were that didn't make the cut?

nosuspicious

Posted by nosuspicious 5 months ago Report

Hey there! I’m glad you enjoyed the story, it was a lot of fun to brainstorm ideas with BunnyWrites and I’m glad most of our favorites made it into the final version.

Some other simple ideas we considered were having the girls feed boys to a pet dog, having them toss them into each other’s mouths, dangling them from string, having them walk on a tightrope over open mouths, and cooking them on a frying pan until they couldn’t bear it anymore, stepped off, and were eaten. We also considered having one of the more tentative girls be shrunk and punished herself, perhaps given to the boys or a lizard for their pleasure.

The ‘circle of mouths’ idea we included was a mix of two ideas we initially wanted to cover. One where a boy chooses which of several beckoning mouths will eat him, and another where each girl has a different boy in her mouth and they race to make hers cum first. The scene with Lei was also initially different; we considered having girls stuff boys into all of her erogenous zones at once.

I’m sympathetic to the criticism you raised in your other comment, by the way. I’m happy to accept blame for that. I asked for a story with a wide variety of somewhat disjointed scenes as opposed to a more focused, linear narrative like we had with The Shrink (which I also commissioned), so it’s inevitable that some of the narrative cohesion would be sacrificed.

In any case, I definitely got what I wanted out of this story and I’m very pleased you enjoyed it too :)

Trebortron3

Posted by Trebortron3 5 months ago Report

Ooh, some fantastic ideas there! I'd have loved to have seen those, although yes, I can fully see why some had to be cut out. I think feeding them to a pet would have been great, but a good candidate to drop, since it's not just another activity but requires introducing a new character as well (by establishing the pet presumably a bit before they gulp down any of the boys). Similarly with the race, that's one of my favourite of the ideas you've just listed, but I see why combining them got the best of both worlds. I'm not normally interested in willing prey, but that one boy who gave himself to them made for a really fun scene.

And yes, I should mention I also enjoyed The Shrink! I read it a while ago, can't remember if I ever commented on it, but I went back to double-check whether the doctor was the same in both stories.

Do you think you'll be writing or commissioning anything else in this setting? Or anything involving the ideas that didn't make it to this particular story?

nosuspicious

Posted by nosuspicious 5 months ago Report

I’m glad you liked The Shrink as well! Bunny really won me over to becoming a regular customer with that one. I still get a big thrill whenever I read it.

I’ve already written two stories in the so-called “Cooperverse” as another reader calls it. Here’s one about Dr. Cooper inviting an unsuspecting student to her office hours for an “experiment” ( https://aryion.com/g4/view/682258 ) and another where she coaxes one of her therapy patients into reconsidering her relationship with her tiny husband ( https://aryion.com/g4/view/672136 ).

As for commissions, I’ve got two more stories in Bunny’s queue set in this universe (although Madeleine will probably only feature in one of them), and I’ve been told another reader has also asked for a story with the character. There is and will be plenty to material to enjoy if you’re digging this universe :)

Trebortron3

Posted by Trebortron3 5 months ago Report

Oh, those are fantastic! The two of you have a great writing style, I'm so pleased you're both contributing to this Cooperverse.

I look forward to the future stories :D

(Any teasers about the content, or are you wanting to keep it under wraps until it's finished?)

nosuspicious

Posted by nosuspicious 5 months ago Report

I'm glad you enjoyed my writing! I'm still relatively new to it, so it's thrilling that I'm managing to scratch the itch for some people.

Everything Bunny's scheduled to right for me is listed in the April Commissions list in their blog, if you wanna take a look there.

Trebortron3

Posted by Trebortron3 5 months ago Report

Oh, definitely! Your stuff is certainly good for a newer writer!

And yeah, I found that blog after these posts, so I've had a read through of the upcoming stories. Some great ones lined up in there!

nosuspicious

Posted by nosuspicious 5 months ago Report

bleh write*, ofc i make that typo when i'm talking about how new I am at writing >_>

Trebortron3

Posted by Trebortron3 5 months ago Report

Haha, well I used to be a proofreader, and I hadn't noticed that typo until you pointed it out, so no harm done!

ShinjiIkari

Posted by ShinjiIkari 5 months ago Report

Man I'm really into the balancing on a string thing now. Make it teeth floss or something. Also I've read your stories partly before and I agree that you are an awesome writer, too!

BunnyWrites

Posted by BunnyWrites 5 months ago Report

It looks like nosuspicious has already answered your questions. I just want to second the recommendation to check out the stories they've written. They haven't just commissioned me to write the fantastic F/M scenarios they think up, but have also written some absolutely amazing stories of their own too!

And yeah the pet activity stuff would have been fun, but I felt it complicated the scenario more than we could fit into the wordcount.

The cum-race is the activity I most regret not being able to fit in. I was a little worried having so many characters simultaneously participating might be difficult to read, and yeah it overlapped significantly with the semi-willing cum-boy (although I like to think of him as unwilling still, but making the best of a doomed situation).

As nosuspicious mentioned, they have another Madeleine Cooper story in my queue, and another commissioner has asked for a story involving her that follows the same arc as The Shrink, but with an older male prey that she toys with much more sexually than she did Benjamin.

Trebortron3

Posted by Trebortron3 5 months ago Report

Fully understand why the original idea for the cum-race would have been too much. Maybe one for a future story?

Also, yeah, I suppose semi-willing does work better for that boy. The unwilling to semi-willing end of the spectrum is definitely where my preferences lie!

ShinjiIkari

Posted by ShinjiIkari 5 months ago Report

I write this before reading and I already know that it will be awesome from the tags and the artists name

If this turns out to be fake I will delete my account

BunnyWrites

Posted by BunnyWrites 5 months ago Report

Lol, thanks Shinji <3 I imagine it might take a couple of sessions to finish~

ShinjiIkari

Posted by ShinjiIkari 5 months ago Report

I loved the imagery of the dark skinned Alysha pulling out Collin of that girls pussy just so he could be her fifth meal... Actually everything is awesome.

BunnyWrites

Posted by BunnyWrites 5 months ago Report

That was one of the most exciting parts to write too. It combines so many fun things, sexual play, lesbians, unbirth, AND oral vore <3

ShinjiIkari

Posted by ShinjiIkari 5 months ago Report

Not a fan of lesbians USUALLY but here it was really good. Adding the first parts to my "favorite bits" now where they just got out of the car and already knew what they were gonna do. I also enjoyed how everyone lined up just like that! Yes, it is always a good idea to trust the adult girls :3

It is a shame that you couldn't include all of the games and stories that were happening inside the sorority, but the story is really long already I agree...

BunnyWrites

Posted by BunnyWrites 5 months ago Report

I'm sure some of those missed activities will make it into future stories, either mine or Nosuspicious's. Btw if you haven't checked their gallery, you should do so. They do fantastic F/M vore stories~

Trebortron3

Posted by Trebortron3 5 months ago Report

Absolutely loved this! Really nicely done, very well written and a great variety of lovely shenanigans. I also like how nicely you foreshadowed various components, like the initial mention of the brother (I'll admit I skimmed ahead to see if he'd appear within the story - was not disappointed!) and the stuff with Dr Cooper.

The only critique from me is that it was a little jarring sometimes swapping between different character focuses. It's unavoidable with so many different characters to juggle, I suppose, but once or twice I felt it took away from the action.

In any case, I think this is a fantastic story.

Can I ask what kind of price range you work with for stories like this?

BunnyWrites

Posted by BunnyWrites 5 months ago Report

Yeah I generally don't like writing groups as it's rather clumbersome keeping track of who does what, and the reader is drowned in names to remember. So yeah it suffered a little in terms of whose perspective it was conveying. I'm glad you liked the story regardless of that though <3

My stories are currently priced at £15 (approx $20 US dollars) per 1,000 words.

Trebortron3

Posted by Trebortron3 5 months ago Report

I think you did well considering how many characters you were juggling!

And thanks for the price, I'll have a think whether there are any ideas that might warrant it :)

(And I'm a Brit, so GBP is fine, hah)

BunnyWrites

Posted by BunnyWrites 5 months ago Report

I'm really curious what sort of scenario you might think up~

Also I don't charge anything for reserving a slot, and if it turns out when your slot comes up that actually you don't want a story after all, it's totally fine to cancel it. So don't feel any obligation regarding it.

Trebortron3

Posted by Trebortron3 5 months ago Report

Yeah, I will reserve a slot then please! I actually have an idea to run by you now, so I'll drop you a PM if that's okay? (I fully appreciate that there's a wait before it'd get written, but I figure I might as well check it's something you'd want to write)

AnAccount

Posted by AnAccount 5 months ago Report

I've tried to finish reading this twice now but the story has finished me first both times. Damn this is good

BunnyWrites

Posted by BunnyWrites 5 months ago Report

That's so satisfying to hear <3 <3 <3

Dragónmacro

Posted by Dragónmacro 5 months ago Report

I wish it had fart and scat, but the story is good but I also wish it had more fetishes and more anal vore

BunnyWrites

Posted by BunnyWrites 5 months ago Report

Yeah this one doesn't have much in the post-vore part, but I have another couple of stories in the queue you might enjoy in that regard~

Zerobotz

Posted by Zerobotz 5 months ago Report

This is hottest vore story I've read! Thanks to nosupicious for commissioning this and obviously BunnyWrites for taking it on.

BunnyWrites

Posted by BunnyWrites 5 months ago Report

Thanks, that's lovely to hear <3

ShinjiIkari

Posted by ShinjiIkari 5 months ago Report

I keep coming back her and imagine how Alysha rubs her belly while she walks home later. Just felt the need to share this.

BunnyWrites

Posted by BunnyWrites 5 months ago Report

That's assuming she doesn't just retire to Bonnie's bedroom for the night~

ShinjiIkari

Posted by ShinjiIkari 5 months ago Report

Oh well, with the five boys she has in her company and the four that Bonnie took custody for, that definitely would count as an orgy. Guess they're really lucky!

BunnyWrites

Posted by BunnyWrites 5 months ago Report

They might even be able to hear the bodies in the other stomach as Alysha and Bonnie lay atop one another~

ShinjiIkari

Posted by ShinjiIkari 1 month ago Report

Reading it again~