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The bitchy, greedy, spoiled demon princess is back!
Thumbnail by the amazing RB23: https://aryion.com/g4/user/RB23 (It's part of a bigger WIP, much like this story, so stay tuned!)
I feel like the last story involving Ana and Minx ending without any "real" vore or explicitly lewd content was a bit of a let-down for a lot of people; rest assured that will NOT be the case with this one. I've got 21 pages thus far completed in the "straight-up-horny" chapters and I haven't finished the story yet. I was originally going to wait until the whole thing was done before publishing, but decided to try to get some feedback to improve the later chapters. So please, leave a comment about what you enjoyed or want to see, you'd be surprised by how much I try to incorporate that stuff!
In the interests of making it easier for people to focus on the kind of content they want, I'll be tagging the chapters as "SFW" or "NSFW" in the thumbnails. That way those readers who enjoy the characters/overarching plot can read all the lead-up to the sexy stuff, and those who want... erm, "the highlights" can find what they want without having to scroll through too much. If you find this useful then please let me know if it's worth continuing trying to do.
Also I would be SUPREMELY grateful if anyone reading this could let me know what tag/s brought my stuff to your attention. Is it worth tagging as "bbw" as well as "fat", "chubby" and "ssbbw"? Do I also need to add "bbw pred" etc.? Are there any important tags that are missing I should know about? Should I tag based on what's in the specific chapter or in the story overall? I just don't know!
Google Drive link for people who find that formatting easier to read: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1tVn0r2WNgRrvlFPPclljchCL-D_UIiNkfXTU8dX1icM/edit?usp=sharing
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Posted by Draegonx 2 years ago Report
I do like the concept of this back and forth, the bratty princess and the servant. It makes a good dynamic. I was just waiting for the princess to thrust herself upon him with "teach me how the human body works" trope. But it didnt happen and the story makes it feel like such an organic progression. Plus you can sense the trouble that might happen in the next "episode". But who knows, im now hooked into waiting for the next one.
I really like it, i also enjoyed the precursor story too
Posted by glargicus 2 years ago Report
I don't know if I should be disappointed I'm predictable, or pleased that you're gonna get basically EXACTLY what you asked for. :p
Posted by Draegonx 2 years ago Report
Haha, The Princess is so Bratty, and forshadowing is something i love in writing, no matter how small or subtle. I always tend to read a second time to find more clues XP