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Tags: Absorption ass expansion BBW BBW pred Butt Butt Expansion Casual vore Cruel digestion Digestion Disposal F/F Fat Fatal Female Pred Female Prey lovers onlookers Oral Vore Pooping public Public Display Public Nudity public sex public vore Same Size Scat Sex Sexual content Sexual Intercourse Shitting Soft Vore Story Weight Gain Wide hips Willing Willing Pred Willing prey writing
A man is working carefully to make sure his wife eats just the right prey to give her the sort of killer body he wants. When he comes across just the right sort of prey in public, he can't resist giving his wife a meal.
I had the predator be sweet to the be prey before they were eaten before being cruel to them when they were in the stomach, so let me know what you think of that contrast. I also tried my best to keep the story moving-it already took me like weeks to get it up here, so I didn't want to bog it down with too many details. Hopefully the minimalism works in the story's favor instead of against it.
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Posted by doomed 2 years ago Report
I love it , though she didn’t come across as cruel or kind but rather like a kid with a new sneakers . They love it and use them up until the sneakers are worn apart . The sneakers were great and they served a purpose
Posted by Bellybook 2 years ago Report
Yeah I think you figured out the tone better than I did. Just the super chill casual stuff
Posted by sandramudd 2 years ago Report
wonderful work