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I got some requests to upload the whole story as one continuous doc, to be read "as intended". So for anyone who would rather read it as one 23K story, enjoy!
This is the *same* story that I recently uploaded as Chapters 1-5, in case you prefer to read it this way:
Chapter 1: Hors d’Oeuvre https://aryion.com/g4/view/694091
Chapter 2: Appetizer https://aryion.com/g4/view/694248
Chapter 3: Sausage Tasting https://aryion.com/g4/view/694450
Chapter 4: Main Course https://aryion.com/g4/view/694646
Chapter 5: Dessert https://aryion.com/g4/view/694932
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As mentioned in the individual chapters -- this is a commission I wrote for irateliterate!
Boom belongs to them, check out their (extremely hot) art for Boom here! https://aryion.com/g4/view/348027 and especially https://aryion.com/g4/view/612029
thedragonboy was a huge help as my writing consultant and beta reader — check out his page, he writes fantastic stuff!
Posted by TrainerKatrine 2 years ago Report
Amazing story, you're a super talented writer, and a welcome sight (haven't seen you before, I think)
This is as an absolute treat to endorse for the past week, and my, do you do a good job of delicate details, teasing, the likes!
I'd love to see more from you, as well as Boom. The only thing I wish - given my personal preferences - was more gas at the end. But this isn't my little check-list!
It was a joy to read, so keep it up ^^
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Posted by wolfSnack 2 years ago Report
Thank you so much! It really means a lot, getting such detailed and positive feedback from a fan -- I hope you enjoy my other work as well if it appeals to you! :D
I love exploring the focus on details, relationships, and emotional arcs between characters -- it's something I don't see much in the vore community, and that I wanted to fix :)
I'll definitely be writing and posting more (feel free to give me a watch if you want to get notifications). Probably nothing else with Boom in the near future, though -- she's not a character I own, so I can't write anything else with her unless IrateLiterate wants to commission me again ;)
Several of my own characters are pretty similar, though, especially a fox named Vicky who shows up in a lot of my Graduation stories!
And my Graduation stories have a LOT more gas. It's something Irate actually asked me to tone DOWN for this commission, haha. So I think you'd like those stories if you checked them out ;)
Thanks again for the feedback, these comments are what make writing worth it!
(If you liked the story, you're welcome to leave a favorite!)
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Posted by TrainerKatrine 2 years ago Report
I know this might be a bit.. Arrogant to say? But I don't think it's that detailed of a review. If you want a detailed one, which I wrote because.. Dunno, actually, then this is the one. Not trying to advertise it or amything - I love this just as much as that, just in different ways, and in fact, I would compare the amounts of detail and style of writing between the two to be relatively similar!
https://aryion.com/g4/view/642569
But I'll give you the watch and favourite, don't worry! uwu
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Posted by wolfSnack 2 years ago Report
Let me rephrase -- Detailed compared to what writers USUALLY get on this site, haha.
That IS an terrifyingly long comment, though XD
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Posted by TrainerKatrine 2 years ago Report
Fair reply, and thank you. More effort than the assignment xP
But yeah, I look forward to seeing more of this gemte in the future ^^
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Posted by MittensMouse 2 years ago Report
This was a really nice read! Some good characters too ^w^
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Posted by wolfSnack 2 years ago Report
Ah, thank you! I'm very glad you enjoyed it -- what/who did you like in the story? So I can know where to focus in the future~
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Posted by MittensMouse 2 years ago Report
Well obviously all the vore was good~ But everything to the character banter and they way they'd interact! Very good stuff
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Posted by TrainerKatrine 2 years ago Report
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This, really. It's not as much the character (even if Boom is precious), as it is the writing style and interactions ^^
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Posted by wolfSnack 2 years ago Report
Thank you both! Yeah, Irate gave me a lot of freedom for figuring out how Zia/Boom interacted. And I took the dynamic established in earlier pictures -- particularly this one: https://aryion.com/g4/view/612029 -- and ran with it :)
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Posted by Randompie539 2 years ago Report
Absolute God-tier. Most immersive stories I've ever had the honor of reading! Amazing detail, you set the scene perfectly! I came looking for gas stuff, & saw this. Don't regret reading one bit!
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Posted by wolfSnack 2 years ago Report
Thank you so much! It makes me incredibly happy to hear that you liked my work :D Can I ask what parts of the story you found immersive?
(And yes, gas fits Boom's type of crassness perfectly, hah.)
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Posted by Randompie539 2 years ago Report
The dialog felt quite organic, as well as it being combined with how you illustrated their actions made it very immersive! I didn't even have to think about imaging the story, your wording is splendidly great! Love the boldness on the dialog as well, it helped against my dyslexia <3
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Posted by Raesetsu 2 years ago Report
Wish this were a regular series.
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Posted by wolfSnack 2 years ago Report
I'd love to write more Boom, but they belong to IrateLiterate.
If they want to buy another commission, I'd be happy to make one! :)
If you loved the story enough that you want a sequel, go tell Irate and maybe something will happen~
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