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Jared decides to take a nice relaxing bath, his girlfriend Rae decides to join him.
Although somethings not right... something's very wrong in fact.... which leads to some strange consequences.
Another 'smallish' story for you all. I attempted to write from the Jared's point of view throughout the whole piece. I hope you like it.
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Posted by Hawkeye7 3 days ago Report
Although I write mainly for myself, I REALLY would love to hear your comments on this, constructive, or just what you like or dont like! It helps me keep going, and create more!
Posted by DigiDemonLord 3 days ago Report
Great story and glad to see ya back.
Posted by Hawkeye7 3 days ago Report
Thank you ... it means a lot to me. Really happy you enjoyed the story ... i hope there is more to follow soon! :)
Posted by Matteo42 3 days ago Report
Good stuff! Not exactly what I prefer, but I can admire good work when I see it
(are you perhaps french, or did you follow when the french teacher told you to put "Fin" at the end xD )
Posted by Hawkeye7 3 days ago Report
Thank you for your comments! I hope it broadened your horizons! :)
As to my nationality… alas I’m not french… but I like to sometimes end my stories with Fin. gives it a nice flourish. I can’t remember if it was from my English teacher or not! Haha! :)
Posted by Andris 20 hours ago Report
Wow you're on a roll...this is terrific! I like the shrink stuff so this is my cup of tea. A very nice story Hawkeye!
Posted by Hawkeye7 17 hours ago Report
Thank you! Really happy you liked it! It’s also one of my favourite kinks! - as you can tell! :)