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Leia had a problem, a serious hunger problem; escaping to a deserted beach should help... unless she comes across anyone unfortunate to be there.

This story was inspired by an illustration from the amazing talented
 lepetitejane1111

Which you will see at a key point in the story! :)


This my first collaboration, i hope you like it!

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Hawkeye7

Posted by Hawkeye7 3 months ago Report

I really, really like feedback on my stories ... it helps keep me motivated to do more!
I hope you like it, let me know, either way in the comments below.
Thanks you :)

lepetitejane1111

Posted by lepetitejane1111 3 months ago Report

I love your stories and the way you handle your characters.

Hawkeye7

Posted by Hawkeye7 3 months ago Report

Awwww... thank you! - it was a pleasure doing this collaboration! Cant wait to see what you have in store next!

thequietmanno1

Posted by thequietmanno1 3 months ago Report

very good!
i liked the interactions between all 3 characters and the situation they ended up in in the end
honestly, i kinda hope that ellie's last comments are a hint that she and pen can survive inside leia's gut, cause i've gotten quite fond of those two for the brief moment we've had them, and they're definitely cute together

Hawkeye7

Posted by Hawkeye7 3 months ago Report

Thank you :)
These two do seem a lovable pair... maybe they'll return .. who knows!
Although Leia may be an interesting character to carry on with .. a hunter 'pred'...maybe....

Andris

Posted by Andris 3 months ago Report

I loved how you described leia's feelings during the act. Very evocative! A great story Hawkeye.

Hawkeye7

Posted by Hawkeye7 3 months ago Report

Thank you Andris :)
I may want to explore her 'darker' desires more, in future stories.

Randompie539

Posted by Randompie539 3 months ago Report

The accidental vore was a great touch, it's one of my favorite sub-genres in vore! I believe describing the characters when another character comes into play would be nice for visualization. I find onomatopoeia for gas, swallowing, them going deeper inside, ect. is fantastic for immersion, so I recommend doing more of that! Oh, and more gas is always nice~ Keep up the great work!

Hawkeye7

Posted by Hawkeye7 3 months ago Report

Oh, i absolutely love accident vore. I find it so fascinating. Really happy you liked the story. Thanks so much for the comments and suggestions. I'll take onboard for the next story - that's in the works ;)