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Digesting a Boy's Curiosity By Thatonedude3725 -- Report

A story I wrote about the curvaceous and hungry androgynous predator Gary Gurgles and a young man that gets in way over his head.

Took me a few months to finally lock this down but I am pretty happy with it for the most part. If there was anything you wanted to see that didn't make it in let me know.

I did my best to make the pred prey relationship one of casual and taboo, the prey was supposed to be willing and naive until he wasn't. The pred was intended to be "horngry", not necessarily sexualizing his prey but sexualizing the aspect of eating him.

Also if you're trying to visualize the pred, I was going for an Abigail Lust kinda character but without boobs. If that makes sense. Anyway, have fun.

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Xenophage17

Posted by Xenophage17 1 year ago Report

Great work, really detailed and a very entertaining dynamic with curiosity.

Thatonedude3725

Posted by Thatonedude3725 1 year ago Report

Thank you so much, I was working on this for a bit.

Xenophage17

Posted by Xenophage17 1 year ago Report

All the warnings and build up are fantastic and I love the childish teasing about poop and farts.

Thatonedude3725

Posted by Thatonedude3725 1 year ago Report

Im glad you liked it! What were some of your favorite lines?

Xenophage17

Posted by Xenophage17 1 year ago Report

*ppssssssssssssssssheeeew* “Oooh and you made me gassy.”

“I… am just food… I was eaten, and now… I am just food…” Billy sighs.


“And farts, don’t forget my farts.

Gary casually puts his arms behind his head, “But, I’ll be honest, it won’t help.”

(quite a few lines honestly, hard to pick"

Thatonedude3725

Posted by Thatonedude3725 1 year ago Report

Fair enough

vfudanshi

Posted by vfudanshi 1 year ago Report

“*mmm mmm* ’yeah kid, just like that, just let me eat you.’ Gary remarks to himself, ‘Maybe I should branch out seeing if there are more willing boys, to hop down my throat.’ Gary looks up, he sees Billy trying his best to take in every single moment and observe everything that is happening to him.”

I definitely wouldn’t mind reading more dumb boys offering themselves up to be gurgled and regretting it when it’s too late... >:ј
I’ll continue reading now tho, it’s super hot! *drool*

Thatonedude3725

Posted by Thatonedude3725 1 year ago Report

I definitely enjoyed the dominant aspects of those lines as well like, yup just keep being eaten silly boy, I cannot wait for you to struggle in my gut when it gets intense

vfudanshi

Posted by vfudanshi 1 year ago Report

I finished the story and it was really good! thank you for this good stuff~!

Thatonedude3725

Posted by Thatonedude3725 1 year ago Report

You're welcome I'm working on another for a friend that will kinda be like this

Pc2424

Posted by Pc2424 11 months ago Report

Really liked the story. Kept me interested the whole time. Wish I could have found a guy like that when I was Billy's age.

Thatonedude3725

Posted by Thatonedude3725 11 months ago Report

Me too!

HumanSnackz

Posted by HumanSnackz 11 months ago Report

Love this story, I really hope to read more of Gary’s stories.

Thatonedude3725

Posted by Thatonedude3725 11 months ago Report

There will be more

Zerg

Posted by Zerg 11 months ago Report

Fantastic story. Any news on the next part?

Thatonedude3725

Posted by Thatonedude3725 11 months ago Report

Not as of yet

Alefelf

Posted by Alefelf 10 months ago Report

Fantastic! My first vore tale and what an introduction! Thanks.

Thatonedude3725

Posted by Thatonedude3725 10 months ago Report

I'm happy I could be your first