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Tags: Betrayal Casual vore Cruel Pred Cute pred deceptive pred drowning drowning inside belly drowning prey F/M Female Pred Head First hiccup hiccups Human Pred Human Prey Implied Digestion Implied Disposal implied fatal Implied Fatality lying pred Male Prey Mean pred Mute mute pred Oral Vore regretful pred Seduced prey Soft Vore teenage pred teenage prey tricked prey Uncaring Pred Underage pred Underage prey Unwilling Prey voremance Willing Pred Willing prey Willing to unwilling prey writing written work
If you don't feel like reading all the proceeding Voremance stories you can just read this one, I think it's a good jumping on point for new readers.
I've been very excited about this new chapter in the Voremance Saga. I actually finished this story before finishing Voremance: Vignettes, and had a hard time deciding if I should have included it in that collection of shorts or release it on it's own. But ultimately I feel like this story is the start of something new and should be allowed to stand alone.
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Posted by Potata 2 years ago Report
Oooo, i sense some conflict between Kiki and her friends. I really enjoyed the small bit weve seen for her, just hoping her frienss dont rub too much off on her
Posted by Rat_Guy 2 years ago Report
Thank you. We shall see if her rebellious phase lasts.
Posted by Gorgrath177 2 years ago Report
Poor Andrew turned to poo by his lifelong crush :(
Posted by Rat_Guy 2 years ago Report
And on his own birthday.
Posted by Gorgrath177 2 years ago Report
Really love this setting you’ve made. Vore can be casual but it also can be messed up and preds mostly live with it by just ignoring the dark parts or embracing it all.
Posted by Rat_Guy 2 years ago Report
Yeah, it's kind of fucked up if ya think about it too hard. A lot of that actually came from just wanting to ignore certain logistical aspects of the world. Like obviously at the school vore was encouraged and students or teachers could do it out in the open, but what are the laws regarding vore in this world? Would Kiki or Amy be arrested if people knew that they ate non-consenting people, and if not why do they hide it? And how do preds control whether or not they digest someone? The answer is I don't know, because I guess I'm not trying to world-build, I'm more into taking an inward journey with these characters... pun not intended.
Posted by bartek21 2 years ago Report
Interesting start to the story.
I'm curious what to do next.
Posted by Rat_Guy 2 years ago Report
Well, I have at least two more stories in mind for Kiki, then I'm unsure what will happen next.
Posted by Matteo42 2 years ago Report
Hmmm, if you end up continuing this storyline, that's some great setup you're doing there! Hinting at how she might evolve later in life, following the steps of her parents... I like that ;D
Posted by Gorgrath177 2 years ago Report
Fuuuuug still feel so bad for Andrew lol. Hope his family finds out what happened to him and who’s responsible. Really hard not to feel bad when ya write dialogue and scenes so believably. Especially knowing the guy is gonna get squeezed out Kiki’s ass a couple hundred feet from his friends and family waiting for him at his own birthday party.
Posted by Rat_Guy 2 years ago Report
I feel like the next story should maybe have a prey that can be disliked a little more
Posted by Pkmnguy6262 2 years ago Report
Nice awesome story. Mute preds are such a big favorite of mine, something about them is just super cute imo and i loved Kiki's character so incredibly much. Definitely hoping to see more of her in the future<3
Posted by Rat_Guy 2 years ago Report
Thanks so much. Yes, there will be more of her, but I don't know when I'll finish the next story.
Posted by Pkmnguy6262 2 years ago Report
Just knowing that there will be more of her makes already happy and excited for it uwu definitely will be eagerly looking forward to it whenever it does finish^^
Posted by ArchLinux 2 years ago Report
why was so good
Posted by Rat_Guy 2 years ago Report
I don't really know how to answer that. But thank you.
Posted by ArchLinux 2 years ago Report
i relly enjoyed this, the pred is very unique
Posted by ArchLinux 2 years ago Report
i know why i like this so much. andrew is a nerd who wants to learn archery just like me, and kiki is just my type of pred