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The aftermath of https://aryion.com/g4/view/705234
One of the main inspirations for this series was wanting to get into the most popular vore tropes and consolidate them into some consistent mechanics, so I hope you enjoy lore as much as vore.
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Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 2 years ago Report
kind of strange seeing Sage have the same questions I would in response to what just happened. Also, deepest lore is appreciated.
Posted by Birichino 2 years ago Report
I guess that is kind of rare, isn't it? But I'm glad you like it!
Posted by Plgc 2 years ago Report
More! More! More!
Posted by Birichino 2 years ago Report
We'll see...
Posted by xXBellyLoverXx 2 years ago Report
I love your writing and their chemistry! Please continue this!
Posted by Birichino 2 years ago Report
Thank you so much! They're really fun to write!
Posted by theheadsn 2 years ago Report
cant wait for the next part
Posted by Birichino 2 years ago Report
It's ready.
Posted by voryure 2 years ago Report
I hope to see more of these two. I really appreciate the lore and world building aspect of these stories as well.
Posted by Birichino 2 years ago Report
That's great to hear! Thank you for enjoying my indulgence.
Posted by RDRW 2 years ago Report
Wow, these two characters are great. Also, a really interesting world you're building. I hope we'll get another part!
Posted by Birichino 2 years ago Report
I'm still pretty invested for the time being, thankfully. Everyone's support means a lot to me, too!
Posted by YepMcNope 2 years ago Report
Gotta love a good worldbuilding and mechanics chapter. Answering all the deeper questions that most writers would just sweep under the bus.
And for all the exposition in here, the Sage/Rosemary dynamic means there's never a dull moment. Whether they're bouncing off each other with quips or having a genuine moment, both characters manage to feel convincing, lifelike, and realistic despite the inherent *lack* of realism required for the setting to work.
Can't wait to see what comes next! Your stories always leave me excited to see more!
Posted by Birichino 2 years ago Report
Glad to hear it! Sage and Rosemary are extremely fun to write, ironically because I didn't fuss about making them anything specific, so it's great to see that work out.
Posted by YepMcNope 2 years ago Report
Yep! Honestly, I think that leans much better into the setting you have going on here. In a scenario that is built around the precedent of being an ordinary vore setup with a twist, it only makes sense to have the characters be pretty ordinary people (quirks on account of the setting aside, obviously). But there's a lot to explore in the minds and personalities of ordinary people! They don't really need to be anything specific to be compelling. That's what slice-of-life is all about, after all.
Posted by Matteo42 2 years ago Report
Oh fuck yeah, safe vore is my shit :D
Posted by Birichino 2 years ago Report
It's definitely my preference, even if it doesn't have as much of a place in the standard same-size setting I'm trying to consolidate here.
Posted by Matteo42 2 years ago Report
Oh that's fine for me. Even if it doesn't fit the setting perfectly, it's not some major plot hole or anything, and still definitely makes the story more fun to read.
Side not, I really like how you didn't put any narrator voice to tell us about this world, instead letting us discover it piece by piece. Those exhibitions I keep on seeing every so often "Girl A is exactly this tall, has tits this size, wears this and like this", or "in this world, people eat each other all the time! It's perfectly normal, and everything makes perfect sense!"...
yeah I'd way rather have more casual, less-shoved-in-your-face settings and casts where you get to know the playing roles over time, and feel more integrated in it!
So once again, thank you for writing the way you do xD
Posted by Birichino 2 years ago Report
Ha, thanks! To be honest, I would give more info about what characters look like up front, and used to, but it makes the writing flow unnaturally. Now I'm mostly finding where an adjective would fit smoothly as I go. Nice to hear that enhances the experience.