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A teenage Pred crashes his older sister's pool party. One by one, the guests go down his cock, but will his sister turn the tables on him?
This was an idle fantasy that I just wanted to put down on paper because I haven't written anything in a while. It kind of got out of hand in terms of length, but I like the result. Of course, I ended up with two versions, because I couldn't decide how it should end.
Scat scene is at the end and marked for those who want to avoid.
All characters are over 18.
Tell me what you think!
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Posted by Firebird22 2 years ago Report
Fun. I think this version is better
Posted by Red_Wolfen 2 years ago Report
Thanks! And yeah, if I had to choose, I think I would make this the "canonical" version.
Posted by Firebird22 2 years ago Report
Karma catching up Aiden works well.
I hope you do more mass prey stories.
Posted by Tatsumi 1 year ago Report
(Reading many times i want ti give my opinion)"karma" nothing how the sister treat him,the friend have eat his girlfriend(s),the teacher which he was close (and from what we until this Moment in the pool he never do a wrong to her sister,so She only come se Petty torward him)and often tease him by eating him,whit the permission of the sister,plus be told all the time to be likes his sister which have ways ignored him........i think the fault Is 100% the sister and friend,they have male him a piece of shit,the First story is the true karma