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Toph puts Aang to the ultimate test of earthbending. It doesn't end well.

This one is a little silly, I admit. I just had fun with it. Enjoy and let me know what you think.

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Nugget1138

Posted by Nugget1138 13 days ago Report

Amazing! Toph was delightfully cruel as a teacher. I loved the unique disposal. I wonder how Sokka and Katara will feel about this? I'm sure Toph wouldn't hesitate to give them the same treatement

tummyterrors

Posted by tummyterrors 12 days ago Report

Glad you enjoyed, I always thought she had a mean streak deep down~

Xenophage17

Posted by Xenophage17 13 days ago Report

Love the teasing

tummyterrors

Posted by tummyterrors 12 days ago Report

Thanks!

Xenophage17

Posted by Xenophage17 12 days ago Report

No worries. Focus on disposal and childish teasing around bodily functions are a major weakness for me and this story does that fantastically.

SmaxTheDestroyer

Posted by SmaxTheDestroyer 13 days ago Report

Love LOVE this concept! Her first act as avatar should be to eat Sokka and Katara, make team avatar a one woman show!

tummyterrors

Posted by tummyterrors 12 days ago Report

So glad you liked it! I have no doubt that’s exactly what happened next ;)

Altimos

Posted by Altimos 12 days ago Report

Awesome!!!
I can just see this animated, with the skull flying out and Toph looking back in silent befuddlement before retorting "well, everything but your skull... but everything else is MINE!!!"
A brilliant read <3 <3 <3

tummyterrors

Posted by tummyterrors 12 days ago Report

Thanks a lot! I had a fun writing it~

Trying124

Posted by Trying124 11 days ago Report

Really great! Toph is a great Pred, so underused as well. Guess it’s fitting that Aang ended up being a lot of “hot air”

tummyterrors

Posted by tummyterrors 8 days ago Report

Thanks! Wish I had used that in the story~