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School Lessons 5 - Simmering Desires By Cruich -- Report

The day of the boiling lesson arrives, and five students are chosen as soup ingredients, much to the surprise of some of them!

Part 1, Part 2, Part 3, Part 4, Part 6, Part 7, Part 8, Part 9, Part 10.

This is a chapter some of you readers have been asking about a lot! In fact, this was planned from the beginning, but I didn't want to spoil anything. If you look back on previous chapters, you may find many hints and bits of dialogue that foreshadowed this selection! For readers who don't care for this kind of meat, come back next week, and I think you'll be well satisfied!

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KaiserDunk

Posted by KaiserDunk 1 year ago Report

Well, it’s about time that the law of averages caught up with the guys who felt that they were somehow exempt from being selected as meat. It will be interesting to see the guys cooking in the pots with everyone watching and smelling their delicious aroma.

Cruich

Posted by Cruich 1 year ago Report

It was hard to answer your comments without spoiling things! I'm glad you're pleased.

KaiserDunk

Posted by KaiserDunk 1 year ago Report

I just wish we could have had Brett trussed and helpless as he was oiled and seasoned for the oven, but the clear cook pots are a nice touch nonetheless. No privacy for the meatboys as they cook.

tonyh1212

Posted by tonyh1212 1 year ago Report

i love that you pick the boyes as meal

readytoroast

Posted by readytoroast 1 year ago Report

Oh my goodness, you are such *teases*. I've been refreshing this website about eight times daily, to find the next part, and here it finally is... and I loved it... especially that we are going to get equality in that some of the male students are going to get cooked... but you got me all excited for Brett's big moment and then you ended on the cliffhanger before he gets his close-up cauldron experience!! Noooo! Well, at least it looks like we may get an entire chapter to enjoy, as Brett gets to experience the transformative warmth of his own body being cooked! Something I thought about while I was reading this was... if a person was faced with being boiled alive, and there was no escape, do you think they'd want to get into the pot sooner rather than later? Sooner might be better, as getting into cold/warm water which is gradually rising in temperature might be easier to bear, compared with being dunked into the scalding heat of water that is already boiling. Yet, the latter might present a quicker death, with less time to consider what is happening... whereas the former allows the condemned the time to truly process what is happening to them, which is mind-blowing in its own way. What a choice!? Discuss!

Cruich

Posted by Cruich 1 year ago Report

Great comment! And funnily enough, Reddit's daily shower thought was on the topic of getting boiled alive a couple of days ago! They said that when starting with cold water, there would be a brief time before it boiled when it would feel really good. Of course, I'd rather hear what people on this site think about it!

bunnysmiles

Posted by bunnysmiles 1 year ago Report

Incredible work. It's lovely to see Bret get what's coming to him; and what goes around does indeed come around, pun intended. He's rather bashful when he's on the receiving end, isn't he? The ladies take great pleasure in giving him his just desserts. Another amazing story! Thanks to you both.

Cruich

Posted by Cruich 1 year ago Report

Something sure did come around!

kitvander

Posted by kitvander 1 year ago Report

Super solid! Normally I'm not interested in guys for dinner, but the writing is super solid and I love the equal opportunity and turnabout! Great work

Cruich

Posted by Cruich 1 year ago Report

Normally, me either, but I did have a good time working on this one.

Lavendercake877

Posted by Lavendercake877 1 year ago Report

Ya know. When i read this i thought i was gonna feel bad.. but absolutely not! this made me wish i had joined in. I usally don't go for teens as prey but omg Brett is the exception. i'm glad the girls were mercifully to give him one last rush i casue i might not have. lol my real regret is i couldn't stick the carrot up he's arrogant ass myself( the carrot is my fav part of cooking lol)


as for the writing .once again you have made this a master piece . its rare vore like this gets my mouth watering and i don't go for hard at all but dang now i'm horny and hungry. your guy's editing is just as good, no mistakes at all. it made readers hungry for more. now i can't wait to see more of Brett's fate heheh and im gonna cross my fingers hoping there might be an extra bowl for us commenters :D

Cruich

Posted by Cruich 1 year ago Report

Thanks for the feedback! I'm glad it was effectively arousing and satisfying in other ways!

I do have to explain something, though, since it seems to be misunderstood by several people. Our "editorial work" on each other's chapters is not proofreading. Neither of us have need of that -- there were no spelling errors to correct here, for instance. Rather, it's advanced critique, detailed feedback, and suggestions for content improvements, or, where noted, contribution of additional content. I'll have to try to find a better way to communicate that in the bylines.

Lavendercake877

Posted by Lavendercake877 1 year ago Report

ahh okay ^^ i understand now :D usually when you see editor it means proofreading. but i now see it can be used for other things. thank you so much for clearing that up :D


heheh i can't wait for chp.6 :D

SummerSun

Posted by SummerSun 1 year ago Report

I enjoy seeing the tables get turned every once in awhile. In this case it seemed almost appropriate that this happened to him, especially after what he did to Mandy and they insinuated about Thora. Bravo on a well written chapter and I am greatly looking forward to the next.

Cruich

Posted by Cruich 1 year ago Report

Thank you!

bronzelara

Posted by bronzelara 1 year ago Report

Very fun to read about how the roles have been reversed for Brett and how hes reacted to it all and feelings towards his cooks over the time of the class. Wonder what the other group and Courtney want Maria for and what the class will be like in the future with no guys

Cruich

Posted by Cruich 1 year ago Report

I think the future is pretty bright! ;)

gingerkitsune

Posted by gingerkitsune 1 year ago Report

Personally would love to see Gloria lean into her pred side more in her cute meek ways!

Cruich

Posted by Cruich 1 year ago Report

Heh, I wish I could tell you if you'll be getting your wish, without spoiling it! :D

Therian

Posted by Therian 1 year ago Report

Best. Chapter. So far. Loved it.