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A writing challenge given by my bf Draconatedz after a watch together of Evangelion. A simple prompt involving the iconic elevator scene with a mostly predictable vorish twist! I threw it together rather quickly but I'm mostly pleased with the results. Hope you enjoy!

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theweirdone445: I'd love constructive criticism and explicit opinions on my works. I aim to improve and your feedback is very important to me.

Of course, any words of praise are appreciated too! :)

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Cactaur98

Posted by Cactaur98 2 years ago Report

Wow, I’m extremely impressed! Ther isn’t enough Rei pred out there, and when there is people often seem to struggle with making her one. But this is darn good stuff! This is probably my favorite Eva Vore story I’ve ever read! Awesome work!

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JMan96

Posted by JMan96 2 years ago Report

Great stuff!

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Uchihabiscuit

Posted by Uchihabiscuit 2 years ago Report

Pretty amazing stuff, you wrote best girl Rei getting rid of Asuka while getting sexier after it, honestly, one of my favorite things you have written so far and something I'll definitely revisit.

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boomerangfish

Posted by boomerangfish 2 years ago Report

Purty good. I liked that a lot

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The K

Posted by The K 2 years ago Report

Love that gassy belch she let out.

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moonpunch101

Posted by moonpunch101 1 year ago Report

Very well done. With how open ended this is, I can't help but imagine potential follow-ups. :P

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