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Sorry, but I love me some Inamesame.
I wanted a story that didn't have Watame or Marine in it, so I came up with this concept. It's my first unwilling prey story, so I hoped it turned out well!
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Posted by FireChicken88 2 years ago Report
Oh this was so good. Both in the sense of feeling like you nailed these characters but also this just checks all my boxes (Kronii Pred admiring herself in the mirror is all I need in life). I love these stories, can’t wait for what happens next!
Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 2 years ago Report
Nice stuff with one of the new members and with one of my fav EN member to boot. Some great interactions with the two as well which were pretty cool.
Posted by LegitUsername 2 years ago Report
Not a huge fan of Kronii- the narcissism, even if played for laughs, triggers some PTSD- but I thoroughly enjoyed this. I especially loved the cruel edge~! Great work!
Posted by LikesWeirdShit 2 years ago Report
Even tho I dislike digestion. It was a pleasurable read. And interesting concept.
And how could i fogot about Inamesame being a thing. Now I want to see it :P
Looking forward to next story or animation or anything tbh
Posted by LegitUsername 2 years ago Report
Another endo fan? OvO
Posted by LikesWeirdShit 2 years ago Report
Endo is short for endosoma right?
Posted by LegitUsername 2 years ago Report
Yes! Endo is endosoma~!
Posted by MysticSummoner 2 years ago Report
Honestly, endo's my favorite, but I have to mix it up sometimes ;)
Posted by LegitUsername 2 years ago Report
Endo, especially when explicitly cruel, is the best~!
Posted by LikesWeirdShit 2 years ago Report
I meant this kind of digestion where a person cannot comeback by itself and it's unwilling.
Posted by LegitUsername 2 years ago Report
Pretty much what I like, but make it nonfatal. Poor prey is just trapped, unwillingly, in the stomach forever~!
Posted by LikesWeirdShit 2 years ago Report
For me nonfatal is the only way to go.
Posted by LegitUsername 2 years ago Report
It truly is the best~!
Posted by MysticSummoner 2 years ago Report
I figured I'd have to try a digestion like this at some point, but there's no way I'd so a permanent one.
And don't worry, you see some Inamesame eventually...
Posted by LikesWeirdShit 2 years ago Report
Honestly you did great. And good to hear that :D
Inamesame somewhere in the futuree, lets goo.
Posted by GeneralUrist 2 years ago Report
Hm, is is just Gura being Gura, or do natural predators have trouble handling getting eaten, the same way natural pray has trouble with something inside it?
And so, we get the lore as to how Shion got into the vore business. Oh Kronii you fool, our taint spreads ever wider!
There's something quite funny about seeing the no-nonsense lord of time confused about someone's voreraphilia. Well, I suppose out-there fetishes are not a demographic that overlaps much with time-bending scoundrels.
The dynamic between Kronii and Amelia is a nice one, and I liked Amelia's attempted resistance. Normally I'm not a fan of unwilling/fatal, but since it's reformation it's OK. The InAmeSame at the end was sweet too!
Gotta say I'm not a fan of Kronii's narcisism when she's alone though. Relatedly, I find the "all the prey goes to the pred's breasts" trope a somewhat cringy. More concerning is that it seems to deviate how the mechanics have worked before- Botan, Mio, and WTM didn't get breast expansion from nomming watame.
Posted by MysticSummoner 2 years ago Report
Yeah, don't worry about the whole trope thing, this is the only time I wanted to do try like that.
For the inconsistency... it's probably safer to think of this as a one off thing, or that Watame doesn't give as much absorbed energy due to her reformations. Whatever it is, you won't see it again. I mostly wrote this because I wanted to experiment with that type of trope since it would have the quickly explainable reversion through time travel.
At least you liked the other parts! Thanks for stopping by again!
Posted by LegitUsername 2 years ago Report
> Gotta say I'm not a fan of Kronii's narcisism when she's alone though.
I gotta say, same. As someone who had to live with an abusive narcissist for 18 years, it really isn't fun to see it.
Still, this was a good story overall, and I enjoyed seeing Ame as prey.