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The original version was very convoluted, but those sections do fit against others. Therefore, I thought I'd upload a version where you can see the order of events. The sections have numbers in brackets at the end that will tell you where they go.
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Posted by doomed 2 years ago Report
geez , this was in the heaviest accent I've heard lol
Posted by VoidInVoid 2 years ago Report
Whenever I get to revisions, Brùideil is going to get her dialogue modified closer to this.
Posted by doomed 2 years ago Report
lmao, for that id need a day to read. heavy accents are great to read but spread it out a bit because they can be overwhelming
Posted by VoidInVoid 2 years ago Report
I think Strea would agree with you.
Posted by Slayerhero90 1 year ago Report
“Dinner is almost ready, Lauren,” a different voice answered, one that Lauren had never before heard but sounded all too familiar.
I think I know whose voice that is now.