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On vacation together, Tori teases her sister Kirstin about Kirstin's infamous, human-eating vagina. Bonding ensues, as does a demonstration of Kirstin's unbirthing skills.
I started this story in 2019 when some of the dialogue the Shoemaker sisters share on the beach popped into my head. Seemed like a cute, light idea, and I think I'm pretty happy with how it turned out.
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Posted by Zalzas 2 years ago Report
Holy heck, the build to the climax was great, and the description of the act itself was vivid. Your a fantastic writer.
Posted by TwrchTwryth 2 years ago Report
Thanks! Much obliged.
Posted by Plgc 2 years ago Report
Love it!
Going to write a sequel? Is the power hereditary?
Posted by TwrchTwryth 2 years ago Report
Glad you enjoyed it. No plans currently for anything else with the Shoemaker sisters. We'll see if I get the inspiration at some point.
Posted by ryanshowseason3 2 years ago Report
I feel like a good continuation might be a similar song and dance but finding another like Kirsten. Then a negotiation for lives must take place. Good pair here though.
Posted by TwrchTwryth 2 years ago Report
Thanks. Unfortunately, I have my doubts that we'll see the Shoemaker sisters again. This story was primarily a vehicle for the conversation in the first half, which is why I had that done for a year or so before getting around to introducing Kiveli. If the right idea strikes me, we'll learn more, but haven't had one that I like yet.