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A bit of an extension/rewrite/fix of one of my older stories found here: https://aryion.com/g4/view/597542
Was gonna just silently replace the old version with this, but I do kinda want people who read the originals thoughts, as well as keeping it as something for me to look back on. So here we are. Now it feels finished.
If people find this too annoying just let me know and I will delete this and replace the old one like originally planned.
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Posted by ClosetedTiny 2 years ago Report
I like this version more. The fact that you expanded on the dialogue and strengthened the story was really appreciated, comparing the two stories side by side i can see that this one was stronger by far.
Should you delete the old one? Eh, up to you.
Posted by Nigh7Sh4d3 2 years ago Report
love it, the arrogant little fairy is exactly where he belongs
Posted by thequietmanno1 2 years ago Report
I think it would be a good idea to keep the old one around, so as to compare the two and see where you've made improvements.
Posted by James17 2 years ago Report
Eternity in a centaur's balls, a very, very, very long time hehe. I do hope he adjusts to his prison over the next few millenia!
Posted by Undrgrnd831 2 years ago Report
Might be more fun if he doesn't :p I'm jealous
Posted by Undrgrnd831 2 years ago Report
Still one of my favorite concepts. So very jealous of the prince here. I'm sure he'll *eventually* learn to love his new quarters.