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Aaaaaaaaagghh. I went WAY too long with this. Originally, it was gonna be 12 girls! 12! I was gonna do a "hur hur, and then da bunnygril up and slurped up a bunch more of dem grils" But I just kept on writing stupidly long descriptions oh my god. WHHHHHY
Breath in, breath out. Alright.
Calm now. Uh, so anyway, Souryuu is best girl. She's serious, diligent, and helpful. But she also knows what she wants and doesn't fuck around. In game, she just straight up grabs you (the commander) and just takes you on a date without even asking. I find this unspeakably attractive. Not to mention she's busty without being comically oversized, she's got reeeeeally long legs, canonically fantastic ankles, ankle length smooth black hair, bunny ears, and GLASSES. Plus her retrofit art is in my opinion is just straight up one of the best designs in the game. She just radiates coolness and elegance. So I wrote her an excessively long vore scene. Sorry, not sorry.
I decided to leave the commander gender neutral. The game is explicit that he's male, but there really no reason he has to be.
This isn't the only Azur Lane story I want to write, but I will go back to Fire Emblem at some point. For my next story though, I actually really want to try writing something original. Thanks for reading.
Edit: Corrected some errors and fixed the line breaks.
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Posted by Pkmnguy6262 2 years ago Report
Neat always nice to see dedicated and lovely azur lane vore content like this^^ and while souryu isn't any of my personal favorites i will still say she's pretty ok and certainly higher on my list then her sister is xd certainly curious what other azur lane girls you intend to feature in the future^^ ~and hoping for some of my own favorites appearing as well xd~ keep up the lovely work<3
Posted by chungus21 2 years ago Report
YEAH!!! I love Souryuu! Happy to see her get some love!
Posted by Raynebow 2 years ago Report
This some GOOD stuff! Specially once she got that perverted crane down for good! Great read and GREAT waifu choice too! Ain't nothing wrong with fully indulging into the thirst, and heck, I'll be eagerly looking forward to ya next piece!
Posted by GoneForever 2 years ago Report
Lovely story for underappreciated character!
Posted by Gladim 2 years ago Report
Good stuff, would love to see an extended version with them digesting. Hope to see more AL from you.
Posted by Ninnin661 1 year ago Report
Nice work!