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Maybe some wounds are self-inflicted, and maybe those are the hardest to explain away.

Finally, a close to chapter 8.
I firstly do apologize once again for how slow and irregular this upload has been. I hope you were able to enjoy the story for what it is. I also hope that chapter 9 will not be interrupted by real life changes and such, but that is how it is.
I love you all, reading every comment on this silly story of mine has been one of the biggest joys in my life because it's a form of validation I've never known before. I know this isn't the best story on the site, and it's certainly not great artwork, but those of you who pick up on the little details and character development make my kokoro go doki doki.

Hope to have something good to share soon. Until then, be sure to appreciate the friends in your life.

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angel97

Posted by angel97 6 months ago Report

Are... are the thumbnails supposed to be what she wants to believe happened? Cause if so, that's a really nice twist you did.

BSGreyM

Posted by BSGreyM 6 months ago Report

At first I just didn't want the thumbnails to spoil anything, but then I thought it might be more effective to hide that detail in there.

neversurrender21

Posted by neversurrender21 6 months ago Report

Thats kind of genius

angel97

Posted by angel97 6 months ago Report

Very cool, very well thought of mate

Razgriz

Posted by Razgriz 6 months ago Report

love it!

Kasra

Posted by Kasra 6 months ago Report

Ohhhhhh dear. This could...actually mean one of a couple things, obviously none of them good.

It's been a heck of a ride, so far! Can't wait for chapter nine!

BSGreyM

Posted by BSGreyM 6 months ago Report

I'm happy you enjoyed the story, I hope the next chapter is entertaining.

DejiruHerald

Posted by DejiruHerald 6 months ago Report

this has been a fantastic series. Man... this has made my heart weep

BSGreyM

Posted by BSGreyM 6 months ago Report

That's very kind to say, thank you.

TheMysteriousSadSack

Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 6 months ago Report

now thats a twist

BSGreyM

Posted by BSGreyM 6 months ago Report

NO ONE could have guessed the snake would eat a mouse.
I'm literally a genius.

PervyLesbian02

Posted by PervyLesbian02 6 months ago Report

...you ever make a tag addition suggestion and then regret adding it, but you can't remove it?

BSGreyM

Posted by BSGreyM 6 months ago Report

Yes.

PervyLesbian02

Posted by PervyLesbian02 6 months ago Report

yeah I did that here.
I thought it was funny to suggest "emotional damage" as a tag, but then thought "wait fuck no go back that kinda ruins the mood"

neversurrender21

Posted by neversurrender21 6 months ago Report

Honey he wasnt your friend, he was kind of toxic and he literally assaulted you

UnknownPerson9876

Posted by UnknownPerson9876 6 months ago Report

Agh! Why do you have to make it such a good cliffhanger?!?

MeTheMe

Posted by MeTheMe 6 months ago Report

The fake thumbnails were amazing and genius, wonderfully done!

WoodyBLike

Posted by WoodyBLike 6 months ago Report

Wait, hold up. I'm confused with what is going on. So she's talking to the community center about what happened from when she started talking to him again to now? So she ate Lemmy then?

Novalori

Posted by Novalori 6 months ago Report

I dont think ive ever been so invested in a comic on a fetish site. Good job once again

BSGreyM

Posted by BSGreyM 6 months ago Report

Fuck I forgot to put the fetish stuff in again.

Novalori

Posted by Novalori 6 months ago Report

Lmao. Nah its fine, that was intended to be a compliment if anything. Cx

Silentlyred

Posted by Silentlyred 6 months ago Report

I’m confused honestly what when she kill him?

TheNamesJackson

Posted by TheNamesJackson 6 months ago Report

It’s a time skip

WoodyBLike

Posted by WoodyBLike 6 months ago Report

Also, you should show how she eats. I feel like that is a missed opportunity since it's only happened once so far.

ShadowDM

Posted by ShadowDM 6 months ago Report

Well I didn't expect this twist.
I assumed this was a coma induced fever dream for him.
Well done.

However poor Sap. She needs the support. But not because she killed him. She needs it to realize he was abusive and toxic to her. She needs love and care in her life. Not what he did.
She clearly did everything she could and stayed reasonable everything considered. He pushed her past her limit. It is his fault what happened.

That said I don't think he was irredeemable. He did a lot of bad and selfish things, but he still had the chance to change. He needed help and guidance too, before even approaching Sap again. It could have turned out much better, if he just tried a little to see things from Sap's perspective.

I still feel sorry for him but...
This was a consequence of his actions.(And Sap needs more mousey snacks in her diet. And lots of hugs)

Love this series.

doomed

Posted by doomed 6 months ago Report

Noooooo!!!! Not a cliffhanger at the most important moment

YouCanFreshMyFresh

Posted by YouCanFreshMyFresh 6 months ago Report

LET’S GOOOOOOOOO!!

YouCanFreshMyFresh

Posted by YouCanFreshMyFresh 6 months ago Report

Lemmy’s dead! Party at Eggman’s!

TheNamesJackson

Posted by TheNamesJackson 6 months ago Report

OH so THATS the reason behind the last chapter. It was the straw that broke the snakes back. Got it. Sorry for calling it superfluous.

TheNamesJackson

Posted by TheNamesJackson 6 months ago Report

Also how does the justice system even work in this world?

BSGreyM

Posted by BSGreyM 6 months ago Report

Yeah, thats actually something i wanna get into in the future, but the trick is in telling a fun story and not something that gets too close to anything resembling real world politics

Assimilation

Posted by Assimilation 6 months ago Report

It's definitely a good cliffhanger ending for a chapter, and your storytelling has been stellar no matter how much you try to convince us otherwise. :)

I'll say as part of the groundling rabble that I was disappointed that Lemmy was made unsympathetic before he died because it lessens the sting a bit compared to if Sap ate him with less justification and a more equal state of emotional turbulence. But that's a matter of trope preference and I've still enjoyed your comic to its very latest page with no waning in my desire to keep following it.

Keep up the great work at whatever pace you can muster.

PS: Not that I've any remaining expectation of vore-smut in this comic, but you *could* do a bonus page that's a shrouded silhouette of the swallow or bite, something to give the "objective truth shot" after we encounter this page. But I won't hold my breath, I know it takes a lot of effort to produce artwork and you've got your own creative vision for the comic.

BSGreyM

Posted by BSGreyM 6 months ago Report

I've seen multiple comments about this being a cliffhanger and I still dont know what the cliffhanger is. I'm probably not a very good writer. :(

Assimilation

Posted by Assimilation 6 months ago Report

We don't know how the situation is going to resolve, if there is going to be a resolution at all. How she's going to deal with it emotionally, what sort of changes she's going to take, etc. I don't imagine it's a cliffhanger in the sense of "is someone going to be saved at the last moment", so maybe it's the wrong word on our part. This is just a chapter ending at the height of emotion so we're calling it that.

JacktheRabbit

Posted by JacktheRabbit 6 months ago Report

A cliffhanger is a good thing. Or can be. It is in this case for sure.

A cliffhanger refers to writing/TV etc stopping at a critical moment. You tune in for the next chapter to learn what happens.

It originates from a magazine story published in the 1850s where the protagonist was left hanging on a cliff, with the words ‘to be continued’.

BSGreyM

Posted by BSGreyM 6 months ago Report

I guess i really am not a good writer. Im not sure what we're waiting for, on top of a handful of other issues but this has certainly been a learning experience for me.