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Young or old, predator or human, boy or girl (or anything else), deciding who one's friends are is an important part of life. Of course, when you're human, a wrong choice can lead to an early digestion.

I felt like everyone, readers and characters alike, could use a bit of a breather after the last couple stories. So, while everyone processes things, here's roughly 3000 words of Sissy being adorable! That's not to say this does nothing for the plot. We've seen a lot from Jack's perspective, and I wanted to give a glimpse at Fiona's side, not to mention a hint or two of foreshadowing if you know where to look. Every good storm needs a moment of calm first...

This is the last of this batch of stories; the next one is still being written, so you won't be so lucky as to get another new upload for a *fourth* day in a row. But so many of the long plans between myself and co-creator  x9comega are coming together, and when they arrive, you'll be able to find them with the rest of HNTBL right here:
https://aryion.com/g4/view/569713

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Mechdragon1k

Posted by Mechdragon1k 2 years ago Report

Might sissy regret eating her friend?

TheDragonBoy

Posted by TheDragonBoy 2 years ago Report

Hm.... this *is* Sissy we're talking about...

5UP3RN0V4

Posted by 5UP3RN0V4 2 years ago Report

No kidding.

MingauNight

Posted by MingauNight 2 years ago Report

I don't think so. She is more like, once he is my friend I need to eat him before someone, so he will be always with me.

MingauNight

Posted by MingauNight 2 years ago Report

And they resolve their differences in the other world, I just imagine the scene: Hello, remember me, we were friends and you ate me. hahaha I would love to see this.

ribs

Posted by ribs 2 years ago Report

personally i hope so. many stories seem to overlook the whole trade off between enjoying a meal and enjoying the company.

wolfSnack

Posted by wolfSnack 2 years ago Report

> Will they have an invisible friend waiting nearby to rat on you for eating someone you’d never even met? she added spitefully, though only in her head.

Fiona, no! Bad werewolf!

> And Arthur was leading the whole pack on a hunt tomorrow, so she had to make sure she had room, of course.

*ominous plot noises*

TheDragonBoy

Posted by TheDragonBoy 2 years ago Report

*ominous plot noises*
XD

Perodian

Posted by Perodian 2 years ago Report

"It's not like Jack could know what it was like- not that it was his fault. Though maybe it was his fault that he didn't know a little better by now. After all, when your best friend is a predator, you'd think you’d be a little more understanding of their basic needs, like their diet, for instance."

Seems like Fiona has failed to realize respect goes both ways in a relationship. Both people need to learn to respect and understand each other, not just one following the other.

TheMysteriousSadSack

Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 2 years ago Report

A pack going on a hunt? That doesnt sound good at all. Especially if it happens to overlap with a certain someones big day out.

TheDragonBoy

Posted by TheDragonBoy 2 years ago Report

Are those things scheduled to happen on the same day? Huh, what a coincidence...

5UP3RN0V4

Posted by 5UP3RN0V4 2 years ago Report

I got a good idea what’s going on.
Arthur and the pack on the hunt will be at the same time Jack is on a date with Ruby.
If I didn’t know better… than Fiona will try to devour Ruby, whereas Jack has no choice but to stop her.
Long story short… their friendship will be declared no more.

TheDragonBoy

Posted by TheDragonBoy 2 years ago Report

Damn, that's a dark prediction. Then again, things *have* gotten pretty dark...

5UP3RN0V4

Posted by 5UP3RN0V4 2 years ago Report

It’s pretty obvious. I mean the end of this chapter mentioning Arthur taking the pack on the hunt… it doesn’t take a genius to conclude how that will end.

5UP3RN0V4

Posted by 5UP3RN0V4 2 years ago Report

Fortunately, I got a second possible ending for that situation.

Arthur and the pack on the hunt will be at the same time Jack is on a date with Ruby.
If I didn’t know better… then Fiona will try to save Jack’s life.
Ruby would sacrifice herself to give Jack enough time to get away, only for him to get caught by Arthur, who commences to eat him.
Fiona, still caring about Jack, spots him halfway down Arthur’s gullet, and saves him by pulling him out of Arthur, and gets him to safety, telling him to get out of here while he still has the chance… right after they have a heart to heart, whereas both of them solemnly apologize to each other (Fiona for UNKNOWINGLY eating one of Jack’s friends, and Jack for lashing out on her because of it).
Long story short… their friendship will be declared preserved, yet things will never be the same for Jack and Fiona after that night.

NobodySpecial

Posted by NobodySpecial 2 years ago Report

Personally just amazed that this world even has a population considering the death rate in 1 minute is larger than our world in one year, including abortion.

TheDragonBoy

Posted by TheDragonBoy 2 years ago Report

Shhhh! It's cartoon logic, if you don't look down you never fall! ;)

NobodySpecial

Posted by NobodySpecial 2 years ago Report

*Gets eaten*
Mysterious Voice: Respawning in 5.. 4..

2Ron2R

Posted by 2Ron2R 2 years ago Report

It's said that even in hard sci-fi you get at least one gimme. I think HNTBL's big one is demographics.

MingauNight

Posted by MingauNight 2 years ago Report

It's not a real world, no one is dying horribly, don't worry. And don't look for logic in fantasy, this takes away all the fun.

Mechdragon1k

Posted by Mechdragon1k 2 years ago Report

Logically consistant settings with great world building can be a delight, like battle action harem side character quest. Come for the absurd name, stay for the combined arm tactics, competent people and world building.

TheDragonBoy

Posted by TheDragonBoy 2 years ago Report

Agreed, though I can’t say I’m familiar with the example given. I always try to keep consistent and come up with answers to worldbuilding questions like this one. But I haven’t quite managed to come up with a good answer for this one yet ^^;

x9comega

Posted by x9comega 2 years ago Report

We honestly COULD say Farms, but that would make it feel even MORE like a Dystopia than it already does XD

TheDragonBoy

Posted by TheDragonBoy 2 years ago Report

I heard Wolf say once that they did the math for their series and even *with* farms it didn’t technically work. Then again, I think their preds eat at least 4x what ours do in a day. Still, not sure farms fit for us.

Noelram

Posted by Noelram 2 years ago Report

Hey, excellent work so far on the series, you two. Very rare that I would find a story where I was this invested in, let alone this type of vore dystopia. Looking forward to the next entries!

TheDragonBoy

Posted by TheDragonBoy 2 years ago Report

Looking forward to sharing them! Glad you like it so much. Always cool to hear we stand out.

x9comega

Posted by x9comega 2 years ago Report

I'm ALWAYS happy to see new comments on these later entries, because it means someone was invested enough to read this deep in~!

CakePisces

Posted by CakePisces 2 years ago Report

The lessons you learn will usually be the hard ones, eh? Fiona is getting there ofc. If there will be a chapter where she finally realizes and takes it in deeep, boy that will be a good read, well...if there is the possibility anyway lmao XD

Daduke

Posted by Daduke 2 years ago Report

Sissy's an adorable little monster isnt she. Arthur has a hunt planned? Could this be a payback hunt for Jack who flung Pyre? The plot thickens.

Relius

Posted by Relius 2 years ago Report

Its been a while since we've seen Sissy. She is a favorite of mine, and I do love seeing her get, and enjoy, a meal!

And Fiona. Poor Fiona, you're getting there. So close. Though, I wonder what your mother would say in response to this, or what Sissy would think of it...

2Ron2R

Posted by 2Ron2R 2 years ago Report

Looks as though Fiona's gonna have a decision to make tomorrow.

5UP3RN0V4

Posted by 5UP3RN0V4 2 years ago Report

Here’s to hope she makes the right choice… which is betraying Arthur and sparing Jack and Ruby’s lives.

2Ron2R

Posted by 2Ron2R 2 years ago Report

No argument here, I've been in camp Fiona eats Arthur since the end of #21, before we even knew his name. There is one other possible twist I might like better, but it's unlikely as it involves a loophole in the mark that the authors may not be aware of themselves.

Shadow0000

Posted by Shadow0000 2 years ago Report

Didn't know that there was a camp Fiona eats Arthur. Joining the camp too.

Would also accept having Jack using magic on Arthur as a magical sacrifice to make Jack a werewolf.

But at this point, Fiona eating Arthur is a better retribution.

Shadow0000

Posted by Shadow0000 2 years ago Report

Its sad to see how her mind is being warped to such a degree, that it's almost frightening.

And the fact that Sissy ate her playmate, who trust her enough to let his guard down, should have been a wake up call for the parallel event that happened the previous 2 chapters.

Arthur really has corrupted Fiona, intentionally. And now he's leading a hunt? Something tells me that he is aiming for the marked human group that Jack goes to, with Jack and his new girlfriend being there, and Arthur knows it.

This is going to be heartbreaking. Unless something like Fiona getting eaten by a human pred and then escape from that pred, I fear that she is going down a dark path of no return.

Mechdragon1k

Posted by Mechdragon1k 2 years ago Report

Part of me is wondering about Fiona going full femdom/yandere on Jack.

Shadow0000

Posted by Shadow0000 2 years ago Report

I can see fendom, but yandere?
Unless Fiona has some traumatic mental breakdown that involves with Jack and her, I don't see this as a possible character development.

Then again, I can see a scenario were she snaps, either being in a near death experience, or a realization after eating his current girlfriend, just taking to her bedroom, raping him, and declared him her lover/pet, and a whole different level of mental stability that will lead her to go feral/berserk if Jack passes away.

I can actually imagine her being so clingy to Jack that if he past away, she would develop some kind of deep mental scar, that any human involved in being named Jack, she would projected them as her childhood friend, and pretty much marked them, and keep them as her copping mechanism for her lost friend/love.

TheDragonBoy

Posted by TheDragonBoy 2 years ago Report

Now that... *that* is dark. Living up to your username, huh?

Shadow0000

Posted by Shadow0000 2 years ago Report

Actually, my username is based on how I stay anonymous when I present my idea or opinion. As I do have things to say, yet with the global population becomes increasingly unstable in mental or psychological fortitude, I prefer to hide myself, and dissappear into the shadows, until I see that my presence or opinion is needed.
As for the previous statement, it can't be darker than the current story, especially when there are darker stories like Beaststar and the like.

Wolfsage

Posted by Wolfsage 2 years ago Report

A chapter with Sissy is always a win in my book, and at the rate things are going between Jack and Fiona, Sissy might finally be able to claim her first human without anyone getting in the way.

5UP3RN0V4

Posted by 5UP3RN0V4 2 years ago Report

No doubt about it.
Sissy’s belly is where Jack belongs.

Wolfsage

Posted by Wolfsage 2 years ago Report

Sure is.

VincentRamone

Posted by VincentRamone 2 years ago Report

Each story keeps drawing me in and wanting to read more.

TheDragonBoy

Posted by TheDragonBoy 2 years ago Report

Success! :D

magicboy13

Posted by magicboy13 2 years ago Report

Sissy's just so cute... but that might be a dangerous development there. A Yandere type Sissy might be a bad thing. "You're such a good friend that I can't bear to lose you! OK, get in my belly now. We'll be together forever!"

VincentRamone

Posted by VincentRamone 2 years ago Report

https://i.kym-cdn.com/entries/icons/facebook/000/014/532/1374796030634.jpg

I think this image may be an applicable reaction to what you just suggested

Wolfsage

Posted by Wolfsage 2 years ago Report

Well, what's wrong with her wanting to keep her friends close by?

TheDragonBoy

Posted by TheDragonBoy 2 years ago Report

A very “Sissy” response XD

Wolfsage

Posted by Wolfsage 2 years ago Report

:D

magicboy13

Posted by magicboy13 2 years ago Report

Permission to write a short older Sissy oneshot someday from the POV of a boy named Dennis? XDDDDDD

Relius

Posted by Relius 2 years ago Report

When Jack is inevitably gurgled, I would love to see the occasional adult Sissy. She is a fan favorite, myself included.

x9comega

Posted by x9comega 2 years ago Report

Granted! Long as you know it’s non-cannon XD

MingauNight

Posted by MingauNight 2 years ago Report

Poor little boy, RIP little one.

MingauNight

Posted by MingauNight 2 years ago Report

Please Sissy, be a good girl and digest him fast, he doesn't deserve to suffer.