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Tags: Azur Lane Belfast Belly Digestion F/F F/FFF f/multiple Female Pred Female Prey larger prey Mass Vore Multiple Preys Neptune (Azur Lane) Oral Vore Queen Elizabeth Same Size Sirius smaller pred Soft Vore Unwilling Unwilling Prey valiant Valiant (Azur Lane) Warspite Weight Gain writing written work
With the Royal Navy in the gutter, it's up to the most dependable kusogaki around to take her rightful mantle and dispatch all the naysayers who stand in her way!
Woah, another long piece?! Is this faction favortism? A coincidence, I can assure ya! Another fun piece to work on, although ya might be be able to tell just how much I struggled with this piece. Really gonna have to reconsider how I approach these longer fics, and how to properly pace em. But at the same time, there's a lot about this one that I like. Like playing with the concepts of helpers and observers with their personal motives!
Oh right, the requests. What's going on with those? (They're not open anymore btw.) I've got one done and the other is also nearly done. So when they're complete, I'll just upload em both at the same time and then get back to the good smut after a short break!
Enjoy! Also, there's probably a buncha tags missing.
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Posted by Pkmnguy6262 2 years ago Report
Nice very lovely story as usual once more, definitely neat to see valiant as pred this time and she's now certainly much higher on my list then before xd also always a big fan of small/flat girls devouring multiple prey and especially mass vore like this~ certainly very eager to see what the upcoming request stories will hold uwu
Posted by GoneForever 2 years ago Report
Yay another great story with small pred!
Pacing in the story is good, just bit quick at the end with the Royal Navy 'clean up' but I believe it would be too long and needed to be broken apart into chapters or such, so its understandable and I wouldn't say it ruins the story or anything
Neptune helping with coup and feeding Valiant is really nice and I like that part, fitting for a royal of herself. Another nice bit is Sirius eagerness to be prey but never get the option for it, big tease for her.
Overall, one of my favourites story from you Raynebow! I don't know how but you kept improving and always made them a treat to read. :D
(pardon the long comment)
Posted by Raynebow 2 years ago Report
No apologies needed, it's always great to hear about this kinda stuff! I definitely regret the ol rushing aspect near the end, but also didn't want to drag it out somewhat, since there's already been plenty of eating action previously and all that good stuff! Something to figure out for the future!
Sirius should've reconsidered her status as a gold ship gosh... But overall thanks! Hope to keep providing boat eating goodness, and especially for stories to keep going up in length! Somewhere around the length of this one is probably a good sweet spot for a longer piece of SMUT.
Posted by algog8 2 years ago Report
Hope she has to deal with all the sirens the same way as a result!
Posted by Raynebow 2 years ago Report
God have mercy on their endless forces...