Posted by Nalzindar 2 years ago Report

I took my sweet time while reading this story, and it was a bunch of fun from start to finish ^^
Xenos shenanigans at the start was pure fun and in character by any possible means, and I loved the creative bondage scene.
The three trials of Draken were equally fun, going from bad to worse for Ayla while I assume Draken had the exact opposite feeling, I assume his only regret is not having the red-haired human as his permanent belly-guest ;P Nice work!
And you had all of my favorite themes covered when you put Elizabeth and Seishin in bed together, ending it with a wonderful threesome at the "climax" XD

I got a good laugh upon reading Xenos' question to Ayla whether things got better or worse without his help!
Despite writing much drama into your stories, you surely know how to make one laugh too^^

Posted by DrakentheBlack 2 years ago Report

I do like to keep other people's OCs in character; that's why I ask you questions about how certain characters react and behave in certain situations :)

I'm so glad that you got so much enjoyment out of all the shenanigans and jokes that were present throughout the story!