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Tags: Absorption choices Cock Vore Digestion Expansion F/M Fatal Female Female Pred Human Human Pred Human Prey Instinct Interactive Jacques Schnee james James Ironwood Literature Male Prey Non-consensual ongoing RWBY Same Size semi-fatal Series Soft Vore Story Unwilling Prey Vore story Vote vote game Willing Pred Willow Schnee
SEE BELOW FOR FINAL CALL ON THE BONUS ROUND.
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Previewed parts are available in full via the link in the series folder. If you have issues accessing a part, let me know.
This entry takes place at roughly the same time as Part 16, around when the last scenes of Volume 3 of RWBY would be happening if the canon timeline was intact, & features bastard pretender Jacques Schnee as the deserving prey of rightful heir Willow Schnee.
As might be obvious, I have zero sympathy for this man.
For voting, the spreadsheet linked below contains a list of every active pred, prey & vore type currently available (in the 'Rosters' tab, under 'Available for Voting'), as well as all that aren't. To vote, look at the list & pick one character as pred, one as prey & one vore type, before coming back here & submitting all three in a comment. Voting accounts should be more than 1 week old, though exceptions can be made if you're clearly not a puppet account. Sorry to those affected by this.
WoVE SPREADSHEET
NOTE: Any character not currently eligible for voting is like that for a reason. If you think they should be, let me know why so I can consider it, but if they're just out because they were voted recently, you will be shot down.
BONUS ROUND: KALI
In Part 16, Kali was the first pred to cross the 20 prey threshold into Phase 4, as hinted in how fast she goes off the deep end.
With this comes an opportunity for you... to be eaten.
I'm going to write a bonus part - as #17.5 - to celebrate Kali's status & there's going to be a lot of vore in it. So much that I want to be interactive & ask all of you to help create the unfortunates who'll meet their end. If you wish to submit a character, add the following to your comment:
- Character name. Something that fits the setting, being colour inspired, but feel free to stretch the definition, within reason.
- Character appearance. 25 words max. This will probably be most of the info the story gives about your character. Make it fun. :D
- Character persona. 15 words max, maybe 1 or 2 sentences. A summary of what your character's like. I will be adapting characters to work in the story, so both vague personality traits and specific details would be helpful.
- Anything else. 15 words max. Fun details about your character's life, quirks or backstory to slip in if the moment presents itself. If there are vore types you'd prefer not to see them taken by, put them here (I won't count them in the 15 words).
There are 11 character slots (randomly rolled for), with 1 per user unless I need to fill spaces closer to writing. Also, characters should fit the world of RWBY. Though I encourage creativity, keep that in mind, as well as that a lot of them will likely be super-powerless civilians who are going to be vored a few paragraphs after they're introduced.
This is my 4th and final major try to get people interested, so if nobody takes this time - as I understand that some of you are more pred than prey - I may need to rethink future special rounds like this. :P
To keep this inclusive, you can submit on Eka's or DeviantArt in any place i've mentioned this, or on my Discord server. You can also submit via any site's PMs if you want to be anonymous, though I'll be reposting non-Eka's submissions here for reference, so if you submit anonymously, only your name is secret, as submissions have to be public by their nature.
Looking forward to seeing what you come up with. :)
Anyway, on to voting!
VOTING IS NOW CLOSED. RESULTS CAN BE FOUND BELOW.
FINAL VOTES (as of 5:30pm UK Time - Wednesday, Apr. 20th)
- #18 Pred - Kali Belladonna 19, Robyn Hill 2
- #18 Prey - Ghira Belladonna 10, Ruby Rose 9, James Ironwood 2
- #18 Type - Oral 11, Cleavage 5, Unbirth 4, {1 Invalid Vote}
Total Voters: 21
Final Leaders: Kali B. < Ghira B. {Oral}
Voting will close in 72 hours (3 days) from posting, around 5:30pm UK Time - Wednesday, Apr. 20th.
GUIDELINES
Vote Results:
- If 2 prey candidates are joint 1st, they both get eaten.
- If 2 pred candidates are joint 1st, one gets the winning prey (decided via coin flip), & the other gets the runner up.
- If a candidate gets the most votes for both pred & prey, pred takes precedence, with the 2nd most voted prey candidate becoming the prey. That said, if there's both 2 pred & 2 prey, the candidate who's both can be a pred, then become prey afterward.
- If 2 vore types are joint 1st & there's only 1 prey voted, which occurs is decided via coin flip.
- In the rare case any votes have 3+ things joint 1st, the outcome is decided via digital dice.
- If something wins a vote, it gets temporarily removed as an option for the next part. If it's then voted for the next time it's available, it'll be removed for the next 2 polls, & so on. If it wins when it returns 5 times in a row, it gains 'Alpha' status & resets to 5 if not voted for, rather than 0, & so on at 10, 15, etc. If it's a pred, they also can't be voted to vore other preds.
- If Self Vore wins, the prey vote will be used for the part after, & the pred will eat themselves, the 2nd most popular type becoming the method.
- If a user votes for Other Vore, they should leave a comment on the part describing a type not already an option (one per user). If Other Vore wins, one of the suggestions will be selected randomly & workable suggestions will be recycled for future polls.
- If Hybrid Vore wins, the 2nd & 3rd most voted types are fused together somehow for that part.
- If Reverse Vore wins, the 2nd most voted type is 'inverted' into a reverse of itself (e.g. prey unbirths pred, then gets absorbed from inside).
Story Outcomes:
- If pred & prey have a good relationship (or something like one), the prey consciousness becomes a voice in the pred's head. Also, if the pair, due to canon or in-story events, are close enough, the pred may be able to let the prey 'take the wheel'. Said pred, in friendly cases, will also have access, eventually, to prey semblances.
- If pred & prey have a bad or non-relationship, there won't be any kind of voice, the prey becoming a small part of the pred's mind, without consciousness of their own. If the prey was a Faunus, in this case, the pred will physically develop their Faunus trait.
- The more a pred vores, the more they'll crave, as the feeling's addictive. At first, as in Glynda's disposal of Cinder, they'll justify it logically (Phase 1). After a while, this becomes less believable & more like excuses (Phase 2, starts after 3-4 meals, really kicks in around 7) with the pred eventually only convincing themselves (Phase 3, noticeable around 12), until they openly admit to craving vore (Phase 4, full onset at about 20). Though this only happens after lots of vore, it takes as long/short a time as works for the story, varying between characters.
- There's also Phase 5 (100 prey), but that isn't important for the time being...
Special thanks again to QueenNyanlathotep, who helped to proof-read and give feedback.
Thanks for reading. I hope you enjoyed the story.
Cheers,
-mp101
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Posted by Nyanlathotep 1 year ago Report
Pred: Kali Belladonna
Prey: Ruby Rose
Type: Oral
Posted by PrimeLvl37 1 year ago Report
Pred: Kali Belladonna
Prey: Ruby Rose
Type: anal
I mean she is the one who Blake gets her bellabooty from.
Posted by moonpunch101 1 year ago Report
This is true. :P
Posted by moonpunch101 1 year ago Report
That being said, I may need you to select a type other than Anal, as it currently isn't available for voting.
Posted by moonpunch101 1 year ago Report
Quick reminder that it'd be ideal for you to vote for a different type other than Anal, as it is currently unavailable for voting.
If your vote is not complete, I may have to discount it, either in part or in full.
Posted by moonpunch101 1 year ago Report
Final reminder that Anal is not currently available for the type vote. If it is not changed, I will not be able to count your entire vote before the voting closes in 5 hours.
Posted by Ray1700 1 year ago Report
Pred: Robyn Hill
Prey: James Ironwood
Type: Oral
Posted by moonpunch101 1 year ago Report
Fun choice. :)
Posted by Alenae 1 year ago Report
i think i will also vote this, even if it seems unlikely to win
Posted by moonpunch101 1 year ago Report
Nothing wrong with sticking to your guns. :)
Posted by 60k 1 year ago Report
Pred: Kali Belladonna
Prey: Ghira Belladonna
Type: Unbirth
Posted by Animetiddies 1 year ago Report
I vote this also but instead of unbirth its cleavage vore
Posted by moonpunch101 1 year ago Report
Gotcha. :D
Posted by moonpunch101 1 year ago Report
Interesting choice. :P
Posted by Daniel14541 1 year ago Report
Pred: kali belladonna
Prey: ruby rose
Type: unbirth
Posted by moonpunch101 1 year ago Report
Fun. :P
Posted by Daniel14541 1 year ago Report
Name: Slade Lancaster
Appearance: White Hair, Dark Blue Suit, dark blue ascot, some silver rings and silver pocket watch.
Persona: Rich, Playboy, Philanthropist from Mistral, deviant that would continue to happily fuck Kali as she ate dozens of people so long as the hot milf was getting his dick wet.
Anything else: From Mistral and is traveling the world to find hot pussy to fuck and interesting businesses to fund.
Posted by moonpunch101 1 year ago Report
Good character. I like. :D
Posted by Daniel14541 1 year ago Report
Supposed to be a rather young man with wealth to his name living the bachelor high life. The idea of fucking the queen if menagerie in all of her feral faunus beauty should be irresistible.
Posted by moonpunch101 1 year ago Report
I can imagine. :P
Posted by moonpunch101 1 year ago Report
Hi there! I'm sending this to all current submitters for characters for the WoVE Kali special.
I'm about to begin writing, and have 7 empty slots left, so would like to ask: If you had any backup ideas for characters you didn't use, feel free to submit them now, as i'm no longer taking just one per user.
There's currently 4 submitters and 7 slots, which means uneven numbers, so this will probably be a mix of first come first serve and just seeing what works. I'm going to initially say take it one character at a time, if you're still interested, as that'll make it easier to handle if everyone decides they have more character ideas. :P
Cheers,
-mp101 :D
Posted by moonpunch101 1 year ago Report
Hi there! Just to let you know that all slots for characters for the WoVE Kali special have now been filled.
Thank you for your input. :)
Cheers,
-mp101
Posted by Kaos Dragon 1 year ago Report
Pred: Kali
Prey: Ghira
Type: Oral
Let's keep it up with moms eating dads!
Posted by moonpunch101 1 year ago Report
It'd certainly be a thematic choice.
Posted by hojo05 1 year ago Report
Pred: Kali Belladonna
Prey: Ruby Rose
Type: Cleavage
Posted by moonpunch101 1 year ago Report
Sounds fun! :P
Posted by Azoon 1 year ago Report
Pred: Kali
Prey: Ruby
Type: Oral
Posted by moonpunch101 1 year ago Report
Fun choice. :)
Posted by Beefsalad 1 year ago Report
Pred: Kail Belladonna
Prey: Ghira Belladonna
Type: Oral
Husband & Wife; together forever
Posted by moonpunch101 1 year ago Report
Seems to be getting quite popular, this one. :P
Posted by Alenae 1 year ago Report
Name: Pristine Sterling
Appearance: silver hair in a tight bun, professional black dress with silver buttons in the front, silver shoes, silver monocle
Persona: outwardly restrained, secretly wishes she wasn't, easily swayed
Other: part of a minor noble family (fear of scandal prevents her from pursuing pleasure)
Posted by moonpunch101 1 year ago Report
Definitely a fun character to play around with. :)
Posted by Alenae 1 year ago Report
i've had her for a long time and i can and will imagine her in almost any world. sometimes, she goes through a character arc where she comes to understand that she can have control over her own life, and ultimately finds herself a more confident and powerful person for it. this is not one of those times. here, she will either die an extremely confused and undignified death or fade back into that familiar rigid irrelevance, never getting the chance to break out. which would she fear more, i wonder?
Posted by moonpunch101 1 year ago Report
Hopefully I can do her justice. :)
Posted by moonpunch101 1 year ago Report
Hi there! I'm sending this to all current submitters for characters for the WoVE Kali special.
I'm about to begin writing, and have 7 empty slots left, so would like to ask: If you had any backup ideas for characters you didn't use, feel free to submit them now, as i'm no longer taking just one per user.
There's currently 4 submitters and 7 slots, which means uneven numbers, so this will probably be a mix of first come first serve and just seeing what works. I'm going to initially say take it one character at a time, if you're still interested, as that'll make it easier to handle if everyone decides they have more character ideas. :P
Cheers,
-mp101 :D
Posted by moonpunch101 1 year ago Report
Hi there! Just to let you know that all slots for characters for the WoVE Kali special have now been filled.
Thank you for your input. :)
Cheers,
-mp101
Posted by SwordkingX5 1 year ago Report
Pred: Kali
Prey: Ruby
Type: Unbirth
Posted by moonpunch101 1 year ago Report
Kali's been a popular choice as pred, i've noticed. She's really taken on quite an energy, here. :P
Posted by Ahrizelia 1 year ago Report
Pred: Kali Belladonna
Prey: Ghira Belladonna
Type: Oral
Posted by Beefsalad 1 year ago Report
Name: Rachel Moretti
Appearance: one blue eye, long green hair, white shirt,black jeans and a black scarf
Persona: Shy & Outgoing, lazy yet hyper girl from Vale; a living contradiction
Anything else: Is a Faunus of reptilian origin and is training to be a huntsman
Posted by moonpunch101 1 year ago Report
Out of curiosity, is the "one blue eye" that she literally only has one eye, or is the other just hidden behind her hair?
Posted by Beefsalad 1 year ago Report
The other eye is hidden by her hair
Posted by moonpunch101 1 year ago Report
Good to know. Thanks. :)
Posted by moonpunch101 1 year ago Report
Hi there! I'm sending this to all current submitters for characters for the WoVE Kali special.
I'm about to begin writing, and have 7 empty slots left, so would like to ask: If you had any backup ideas for characters you didn't use, feel free to submit them now, as i'm no longer taking just one per user.
There's currently 4 submitters and 7 slots, which means uneven numbers, so this will probably be a mix of first come first serve and just seeing what works. I'm going to initially say take it one character at a time, if you're still interested, as that'll make it easier to handle if everyone decides they have more character ideas. :P
Cheers,
-mp101 :D
Posted by moonpunch101 1 year ago Report
Hi there! Just to let you know that all slots for characters for the WoVE Kali special have now been filled.
Thank you for your input. :)
Cheers,
-mp101
Posted by moonpunch101 1 year ago Report
Hi Beef,
I have a quick question for you about the character of Rachel Moretti you submitted for the WoVE Kali special: You described her as a reptilian Faunus, but i'd like to ask what her trait is, as my brain's defaulting to a tail but I don't want to assume if you had something else in mind. :)
Cheers,
-mp101
Posted by Beefsalad 1 year ago Report
Yes, she has a tail; like that of a snake
Posted by Beefsalad 1 year ago Report
A rattlesnake to be clear
Posted by moonpunch101 1 year ago Report
Thanks for the clarification. :)
Posted by MoonColva90 1 year ago Report
(sigh) looks like my fear was justified. People are only voting for whoever the top dog is to be eaten, instead of building someone new up. This story was fun while it lasted.
Posted by Kaos Dragon 1 year ago Report
I think it's partly that we're running out of popular characters. She's the last big name around. I'd rather she survive and eat someone next time around so we keep her going, but we'll have to wait and see how everyone else votes.
Posted by moonpunch101 1 year ago Report
Given that the last part had Winter as prey, who was somewhat out of left field as far as I saw it, I would argue that there's still plenty of opportunities for others to be built up. :)
Posted by MoonColva90 1 year ago Report
And you've done a great job, even with the audience dictating how the story goes. However, I've felt the story has dipped in quality ever since Nora ate Raven. The reason why this one stood out to me was that it was so disconnected from the main 'story'. I'll still read them, but I won't be voting anymore, as it feels like audience is mainly going with what they want, rather than what makes sense narrative wise.
Posted by moonpunch101 1 year ago Report
That's fair enough. I think that was sort of inevitable in the end.
Personally I don't mind it for the most part, as I like the challenge of writing for unexpected combinations and outcomes, but I can see how that might get frustrating as a reader after a while. :)
Posted by 6453101 1 year ago Report
Pred: Kali Belladonna
Prey: Ruby Rose
Type: Unbirth
Posted by Tigersolder1913 1 year ago Report
Pred: Kali Belladonna
Prey: Ghira Belladonna
Type: Cleavage
Posted by TheHangryWaffle 1 year ago Report
Pred: Kali Belladonna
Prey: Ruby Rose
Type: Oral
Posted by Zaxzen 1 year ago Report
Pred: Kali Belladonna
Prey: Ghira Belladonna
Type: Oral
Posted by kuro199833 1 year ago Report
pred:
prey: ghira (I refuse to let ruby get eaten)
type: oral
Posted by Beefsalad 1 year ago Report
Excuse me for my rude response but where is the Pred?
Posted by MoonColva90 1 year ago Report
I think he was going to write Kali. Can't think of anything else, since the only other pred voted for has only 2, compared to Kali's 14.
Posted by moonpunch101 1 year ago Report
Would it be possible for you to specify your Pred? If your vote is incomplete, I may not be able to count it in full. :)
Posted by kuro199833 1 year ago Report
pred: kali (sorry, didnt notice that I didnt write the pred
prey: ghira
type: oral
Posted by mysteryman1626 1 year ago Report
Kali Belladonna
Ghira Belladonna
Oral
Posted by thequietmanno1 1 year ago Report
Pred: Kali Belladonna
Prey: Ruby Rose
Type: Clevage vore
Posted by MoonColva90 1 year ago Report
Pred: Kali Belladonna
Prey: Ghira Belladonna
Type: Clevage
Posted by DreadkingRathMH 1 year ago Report
Pred:Kali
Prey:Ruby
Type:Oral
Posted by moonpunch101 1 year ago Report
I'm afraid the vote ended yesterday. I appreciate the enthusiasm, though. :)
Posted by dinoman514 1 year ago Report
Forgive my rudeness but I call foul, you've been building up this 20 prey counter this whole time and then someone who's introduced this late in gets it first? I like Kali and all but this really feels like that threshold was stolen from Ruby who we've been fallowing sense the start.
I know I don't have much room to talk given that I haven't been participating in the voting but maybe now's the time to get back to it.
Sorry for the rant but I had to get that off my chest
Posted by moonpunch101 1 year ago Report
Fair enough getting it off your chest. Sometimes that's the nature of a public vote, though admittedly the sudden swing toward Kali was unexpected at the time, though I was happy to go along with it.
Had it been Ruby, Nora or anyone else who had gotten to the 20-mark first, they'd be getting the same treatment.
Posted by Nyanlathotep 1 year ago Report
Name: Momo Nozomi
Appearance: Pink. Pink hair. Poofy pink and white dress. Pink hair ribbons. Pink.
Persona: A selfless and innocent young huntress who wants nothing more than to bring her friends as much hope as possible!
Misc: Wields a bow?
Posted by moonpunch101 1 year ago Report
Sounds like a fun character to play around with. :D
Posted by moonpunch101 1 year ago Report
Hi there! I'm sending this to all current submitters for characters for the WoVE Kali special.
I'm about to begin writing, and have 7 empty slots left, so would like to ask: If you had any backup ideas for characters you didn't use, feel free to submit them now, as i'm no longer taking just one per user.
There's currently 4 submitters and 7 slots, which means uneven numbers, so this will probably be a mix of first come first serve and just seeing what works. I'm going to initially say take it one character at a time, if you're still interested, as that'll make it easier to handle if everyone decides they have more character ideas. :P
Cheers,
-mp101 :D
Posted by Nyanlathotep 1 year ago Report
Name: Kaneko Chīzu
Appearance: Female. Short, busty blonde with long, curling pigtails.
Persona: Kind, motherly.
Misc: Wields a musket. Momo Nozomi's best friend.
Posted by moonpunch101 1 year ago Report
I love them already. If you have any other characters, by all means post them. :)
Posted by Nyanlathotep 1 year ago Report
Have another then :P
Name: Saffron Shield
Appearance: Female. Tall blonde with a ponytail.
Persona: Masochistic.
Misc: Wields a sword and shield. Friends with Cherry Bomb and & Aqua Vitae.
Posted by moonpunch101 1 year ago Report
Another fun one! I'm guessing by those names that you have a few more in mind? :P
Posted by Nyanlathotep 1 year ago Report
I might have :P
Name: Cherry Bomb
Appearance: Female. Short, skinny, brunette.
Persona: Explosive?
Misc: Fights using Fire Dust. Friends with Saffron Shield and Aqua Vitae.
Posted by moonpunch101 1 year ago Report
I take it the last couple are meant to be part of a trio, then. Who's our third member?
Posted by Nyanlathotep 1 year ago Report
Some of our viewers at home might have already guessed who this character is based on :P
Name: Aqua Vitae
Appearance: Blue-haired.
Persona: A real goddess. Until she faces danger, at which point she becomes a massive crybaby.
Misc: Fights using Water Dust. Friends with Saffron Shield and Cherry Bomb.
Posted by moonpunch101 1 year ago Report
I can only guess. :P
Any more for us?
Posted by Nyanlathotep 1 year ago Report
*rummages in bag* Let's see...
Name: Aka Jijo
Appearance: Female. Short, red-haired.
Persona: Arrogant. Fiery. Tsundere.
Misc: Non-huntress. Ichigo's girlfriend.
Posted by moonpunch101 1 year ago Report
Aka, huh? Gee, I wonder who this could be a reference to? :P
I assume "Ichigo" is in your bag, as well?
Posted by Nyanlathotep 1 year ago Report
How did you guess? :P
Name: Ichigo Aoi
Appearance: Male. Short, brown-haired. Blue-eyed.
Persona: Timid. Meek. Nervous.
Misc: Non-huntsman. Aka's boyfriend.
Posted by moonpunch101 1 year ago Report
Fingers crossed we don't have to make "Ichigo" and "Aka" get in a giant robot, hmm? :P
Okay, at this point there's only 1 character slot left, so I might as well ask if you have one more. :)
Posted by Nyanlathotep 1 year ago Report
Why, as it happens...
Name: Shino Choujo
Appearance: Female. Short. Albino.
Persona: N/A
Misc: Non-huntress. Ichiro's* other girlfriend?
*Apologies, I misspelled it as 'Ichigo' in my previous comments, but it has to be 'Ichiro' for the joke to work :P
Posted by moonpunch101 1 year ago Report
Gotcha on the name. :)
And what are an "Ichiro" and "Aka" without their "Shino", eh?
With that, the roster of prey is complete! Thank you so much for helping me to fill this thing up (apologies to Kali for indirectly calling her a 'thing'). :P
Posted by locomaniac5297 1 year ago Report
Wish there were pictures to show the progress of the series.
Posted by moonpunch101 1 year ago Report
As do I. Unfortunately, I can't justify spending money on things like that. :P
Posted by locomaniac5297 1 year ago Report
Ow, financially murations difficult to appropriate at this time?
Posted by moonpunch101 1 year ago Report
I'd have to explain to the people who help me with my finances where the money went. Kind of an awkward conversation I don't really want to have. :P
Posted by locomaniac5297 1 year ago Report
Say no more, I understand.
Posted by moonpunch101 1 year ago Report
:)