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In order to become the first human mage, Cali must take an elf's magic into herself.... along with the entire elf.
The story is split into two parts below. Part 1 is mostly plot and a bit of lewdness, Part 2 has unbirth and more lewdness.
F/F, Unbirth, Non-Fatal, Permanent Entrapment, Unwilling Prey
This is my first attempt at a story here, criticism and feedback would be appreciated!
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Posted by Nevek 1 year ago Report
Damm fine job!
Posted by drunkchipdip 1 year ago Report
Thank you! I hope the formatting came out alright.
Posted by Whereaminow27 1 year ago Report
I would love to see Tyrsia after a length of time, escape from Cali, and then decide to come protect her from another Elf girl, and use that New elf girl as a replacement, because she has fallen for her, since she already somewhat liked her, but now she can be with her for a very long time. Etc. :/
Posted by drunkchipdip 1 year ago Report
An interesting idea! I haven't started on a followup story yet, but I might start working on one soon.
Posted by Whereaminow27 1 year ago Report
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Posted by LemonBarb 1 year ago Report
Honestly, my alternative idea if going permament entrapment. Is the 'medium term' aspect/prospect of Tyrsia starting to fuse/merge with Cali's 'womb'. And 'maybe' having a chance of taking over her body, before ending up being stuck as a 'sapient organ'...
While at a stretch, Cali might be morphing/transforming into an elf in her own right, long term. If going by "Mana mutation/evolution" Here.
Posted by Lewdghost 1 year ago Report
Huh, permanent entrapment is a hard one to really catch my interest, but damn you did a good job here!
Posted by qwertyvore 1 year ago Report
Lovely story & permanent entrapment is always the best
Posted by Alabastards 1 year ago Report
Wonderful work! I’d be eager for more Yuri and Endosoma
Posted by Paraffine 1 year ago Report
And with that, we learn, you should always treat your servants with kindness, otherwise you might be in for a surprise.... Well done!
Posted by secretitt 1 year ago Report
Absolutely loved this. Entire concept is incredible
Posted by Mechdragon1k 1 year ago Report
I wonder what a dragon or another elf would make of this human.
Posted by LemonBarb 1 year ago Report
At a glance, loving how this is going. And no doubt if we're going long term turned into a 'mana battery', imagine if the human 'mage' ended up symbioting her way into integrating her 'immortality', for long life as well? While making/turning her elven captive, more a 'magical organ' to her in the long run forever connected/fused to her body, perma entrapment/bio-dependency wise?
Posted by Groblek 1 year ago Report
Ooh, that’s a fun concept, and well- executed. Nicely done!
Posted by Sauvegarde 1 year ago Report
What a treat! I love it :)