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Tags: Endosoma F/? false pregnancy Feet first Feline Feline pred Furry Pred healing stomach Healing Vore Hiding in stomach Jungle Long Term Endo Magic motherly pred new home object swallowing Object Vore Onomatopoeia Oral Vore Panther Pantheress POV Prey POV Protective Pred pseudo-pregnancy Safekeeping Second Person POV Size difference Soft Vore teasing Unwilling to Willing prey Willing prey
Something new for me, a second-person POV story! One of many WIP stories that's been sitting on my hard drive for months at this point. I'm not totally happy with this one; I deliberately went light on the POV character's personality, and I feel like there's more potential to the pred/prey psychic link idea. But I hope you guys like it regardless of what I think!
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Posted by degenerate28 2 years ago Report
I wish I was that human
Posted by Indighost 2 years ago Report
Interesting story. The predator never eats anything for nutrition, then?
Posted by OhLordyWordy 2 years ago Report
Indeed, she does not. She is more a spirit of the rainforest given physical form to watch over and defend it, sustained by ambient energy/aura instead of real food.
I’ll admit that I didn’t delve into the logistics of it all when writing this particular story, instead I wanted to focus more on the fantasy.
Posted by hayabusa113 2 years ago Report
And what a great fantasy it was
Posted by hyperxheadphones22 2 years ago Report
This was great! if there's ever a sequel I always enjoy reading about the daily lives post-endo. Would love to see her walking around more with her full belly and to see more of her protective side when encountering other predators in more detail.
Posted by OhLordyWordy 2 years ago Report
Thank you! Honestly, the positive reception this story and pred character are receiving is really tempting me to write a sequel!
Posted by hyperxheadphones22 2 years ago Report
You should-but only if you want to! Your writing is great and I'd love see more of her in this state.
Posted by Camaro511 2 years ago Report
Very intriguing. What happens to the phone she swallowed, though? Stays fully intact?
Posted by OhLordyWordy 2 years ago Report
That’s a good question. Something to consider for the sequel! Perhaps she keeps it stowed undigested in her intestines until the day she decides to finally release her prey—assuming they ever want to leave, of course.
Posted by Camaro511 2 years ago Report
That could be fun! Or the alternative being she eventually decides to let her gut break it down. Finally erasing the very last piece of the outside world her prey possessed
Posted by OhLordyWordy 2 years ago Report
Also an interesting idea!
Posted by BlueDream 2 years ago Report
Love it! Safekeeping is my new favourite.
Posted by OhLordyWordy 2 years ago Report
Thanks!
Posted by brudda 2 years ago Report
honestly
this is
very epic
you receive a
Brudda Seal of Approval
Posted by OhLordyWordy 2 years ago Report
Ay thanks mate
Posted by brudda 2 years ago Report
i should be
thanking you
for writing this
masterpiece
of a story
Posted by Omega271 11 months ago Report
I love it