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Nichole is looking to get those gains, so she starts on a new diet. The fresher the meat the better.
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First time really getting full-on into scat and definitely my first time doing any cooking vore. I hope you all enjoy! Let me know if you want more scat/cooking in the future.
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Posted by KimMadcox 1 year ago Report
I would definitely love more scat content from you^^
Nice story, definitely wetted my um... appetite^^'
Posted by thegasper 1 year ago Report
Thanks so much! Knowing what people like nearly guarantees I'll keep doing it in the future. Glad you liked what you read.
Posted by ShinjiIkari 1 year ago Report
Love this story! It's more brutal than many others but that didn't bother me. You said before that you'd like to know what exactly your readers like about it so you may do more of it... Here comes the good things list, hope its a bit helpful at least:
- slight but not overbearing critique on the society, as if Nichole couldn't build a grill on her own just because she's a women
- Not wearing panties
- upskirt scene and how you described her slit
- her assessing his dick size and the story reducing him to the role of a dick haver or food basically
- kissing him on the forehead
- doing smalltalk and getting off while he burns, it gave me a few Farnese vibes (Berserk character) even if their background is completely different
- The real kiss
- pregnant comparison
- her cunt dripping at his please
- calling the shit Jeremy
- getting her ass licked clean
- Feeling up her still partly full belly in the end
After writing this list I feel like I'm just as bad as Nichole. But it's also a fun feeling! Didn't expect it to be so long.
Things I found weird were Nichole wondering if Jeremy thinks about fucking her "tight little holes" (I guess as vore fan I prefer big holes) and Nichole being so muscly. The plumber didn't add to my personal enjoyment, but it was a nice thought about how other people's cum is piling up on Jeremys burial grounds!
Thank you for writing and sharing this story, it was a very good read~
Posted by thegasper 1 year ago Report
Glad you read it.