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What happens when something important becomes defunct.
I was inspired by when a professor at my university posted homework on an inactive part of the university website.
Posted by Lukenul 1 year ago Report
It would be really nice if you could give more details into the vore rather than having a play-by-play of what's happening :)
Also, you might want to consider using indents on new paragraphs for easier reading!
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Posted by TheDarkTraveler 1 year ago Report
I do go into more detail on the vore in some of my other stories but didn't fit the narrative of this one. Vore in this story is meant to be something that people do almost without thinking about it or the consequences. They rely on the regenerator and are not prepared if it goes wrong. as for the ease of reading, I write all my stories in word it is just this site that compresses them.
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Posted by Lukenul 1 year ago Report
I understand the idea that it might be commonplace in this world but it's more for the readers to include more detail.
And I would recommend exporting as RTF so that it maintains indents as well as expands to cover the viewing window.
I quite like the story concept, by the way.
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Posted by TheDarkTraveler 1 year ago Report
thanks
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