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Seishin's Birthday Gift (story) By DrakentheBlack -- Report

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This is a story I made inspired by the comic  Nalzindar made for me, which you can find here: https://aryion.com/g4/view/791242

I originally wanted to write a story for this, but then the progress was lost, so I thought I would just upload the comic. Then Nalzindar informed that he was looking forward to seeing whatever story I came up with for it, which I informed I didn't have a story, but then I thought, yeah...

So that's why my upload is a little late this week. I hope you'll enjoy both his work and my work regardless :)

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Mechdragon1k

Posted by Mechdragon1k 1 year ago Report

What happens if draken wants to see the cosplayers.

DrakentheBlack

Posted by DrakentheBlack 1 year ago Report

He would have wound up eating them as well, though not before fucking a few of them.

Nalzindar

Posted by Nalzindar 1 year ago Report

Nice, I hadn't expected to read this from one of the model's point of view, but it certainly added another dimension to it. I'd especially enjoy the hiding-while-watching the impending doom come closer and the stomach scene^^

DrakentheBlack

Posted by DrakentheBlack 1 year ago Report

I was originally writing it from both Seishin's perspective and the models. When I had to rewrite, I decided to go from the perspective of one of the models since I feel the comic itself does a good job of filling in Seishin's point of view on the matter.

PrinnyDood

Posted by PrinnyDood 1 year ago Report

This was great, and right up my ally to boot! Fun banter and sexy action all the way through!

I also really love her motivation: “My mate has a thing for girls like Nausicaa, Arrietty , Su Jiuer , Renee… So even if you are just dressing up like them, you are clearly trying to be more appealing to him, and that’s something I can’t forgive. Draken is MINE!”

There's something really great about that yandere-jealousy into vore setup that I love. :D

Great stuff!

DrakentheBlack

Posted by DrakentheBlack 1 year ago Report

Thank you!
Just as Nalzindar used your story for the setting, I also drew inspiration for what happens when the predator winds up with a belly full of girls,

I love yandere girl type! Though she's not a girl you can have in a harem...