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John 1 By TheHungrySpeedrunner -- Report

First vore story lol! Do be warned (CW): there is graphic digestion, masturbation, and scat so yeah lol.

Let me know what u think in the comments that really helps and let me know what I can write next! I’m already working on the next stories but I’m always open to new options!

If you can’t view the story I do apologize it’s my first time uploading, any advice on how to do it better would be appreciated!

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AlekSavarov

Posted by AlekSavarov 1 month ago Report

Yeah, unfortunately am not able to read or download. Might want to try uploading the story as a PDF/different type of file format than whatever you used. I know the site can be weird about properly displaying certain formats!

TheHungrySpeedrunner

Posted by TheHungrySpeedrunner 1 month ago Report

Is it better now? Thanks for the advice btw!

Mage24365

Posted by Mage24365 1 month ago Report

PDF is your best bet. Word has an option for saving as such.

TheHungrySpeedrunner

Posted by TheHungrySpeedrunner 1 month ago Report

Thanks for the advice, does it work for u now?

Mage24365

Posted by Mage24365 1 month ago Report

Working now!

KimMadcox

Posted by KimMadcox 1 month ago Report

Doesn't work for me :(

NaughtyServant

Posted by NaughtyServant 1 month ago Report

Despite it has some elements I usually don't enjoy myself, this story is so hot and I enjoyed it a lot! I has several kinks I love and it was very fun take a moment to read it!
Also, the way you write is pretty fun and the descriptions on the digestion part are amazing!

TheHungrySpeedrunner

Posted by TheHungrySpeedrunner 1 month ago Report

Thanks so much! I’m glad u liked it!

KittensMittens67

Posted by KittensMittens67 1 month ago Report

Love the casual cruelty John has for his prior friend, also big fan of mocking meals by telling them their fate or masturbating without a care. Disposals always a great finale too, and recently I’ve been intrigued by bone crushing like you touched on here

TheHungrySpeedrunner

Posted by TheHungrySpeedrunner 1 month ago Report

Thanks for your thoughts and glad u liked it!