Posted by notitthrowaway 1 year ago Report

Incredible work, as always. Now I can't stop thinking about what would it be like if a person got all squished inside her like that car...

Posted by ninth 1 year ago Report

Hmm, alternate ending? ;) Thank you!

Posted by Zolatul 1 year ago Report

Skimming through the story a bit but it's quite nice, although I must admit more of Ashe's attempted "teasing" remarks come off more like a bit of a narcissist or otherwise just completely oblivious to the emotional attachment the dude has to the vehicle, so that does sour it a bit for me personally, but that's just a personal tidbit. I'll probably write more once I've finished but otherwise it's written incredibly well, just wanted to note that tiny disconnect between the story constantly calling her "teasing" and the reality of the situation making her come off more obnoxiously up her own ass, in a sense.

Posted by Zolatul 1 year ago Report

Well, the ending was, actually, not what I expected at all. I must say I don't exactly see how he 180'd from being so invested in that vehicle as he was in the first story to what happened here, it makes no sense to me honestly. Sexy as hell but the character motivations feel shifted and hamfisted into fitting the "get together" narrative, although I will admit it's still well written in spite of my complaints and as I said in my previous comment, if that's what the commissioner asked for then I can't really complain. Glad to see more of your work though, regardless of everything else I've said

Posted by HungryAL 1 year ago Report

Hot girl crushing car with ass is hot, what can I say?

Posted by ninth 1 year ago Report

Hey, thanks for your comments!

Posted by ninth 1 year ago Report

Updated! I've added some more to that scene at the end to help the transition feel less jarring.

Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 1 year ago Report

That was a split second short of becoming a horror show. Still pretty damn hot, gotta feel bad for my man and his car though.

Posted by ninth 1 year ago Report

Thank you! A close call indeed... It's OK, she's gonna buy him another one!

Posted by soline 1 year ago Report

Well this is wonderful, HungryAL definitely hit on a great idea for a story!

Love the idea of hammerspace not being used for completely casual/mass vore. Ashe has a hammerbooty but it's just got his car in because that's all she felt like shoving up there and she feels it entirely. Much as I love the opposite ("oh...you had a red car didn't you, the blue truck was from last...month?") this is equally awesome and rarer I think.

Very much hoping for a sequel, or maybe a prequel? Would love to see Ashe packing something with a little more kick than an inanimate object >:D

Posted by ninth 1 year ago Report

Thanks! Yeah there will likely be a sequel at some point...