Posted by NommySandy 1 year ago Report

Like the mouthplay.
How fun!

Posted by Rat_Guy 1 year ago Report

Thank you!

Posted by NommySandy 1 year ago Report

Your welcome! Never a fan of human pred myself.
Only like humans as prey.

Posted by Bright 1 year ago Report

Now that's a good talent :p
Enjoyed reading this

Posted by Rat_Guy 1 year ago Report

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it!

Posted by doomed 1 year ago Report

this deserves a part 2 lol

Posted by Rat_Guy 1 year ago Report

Well thanks, but this'll probably be the only one.

Posted by LemonBarb 11 months ago Report

All I'd say, is if there were a Part 2...

"Try to convince Tanya to spit Max out", but she just... Doesn't feel like it? When her 'pregnant' belly is digesting some long deserved meal?

Posted by SSJBura 1 year ago Report

This was great! Hope she lets him out privately later

Posted by Rat_Guy 1 year ago Report

Thank you! Whatever happens next is out of my hands.

Posted by Plgc 1 year ago Report

Can't wait until they get drunk and brag about their friend and accidentally consign another friend to destruction!

Posted by Rat_Guy 1 year ago Report

Definitely could happen.

Posted by Zenith- 1 year ago Report

In the thumbnail, what is that in her mouth? I can't quite make it out

Posted by Rat_Guy 1 year ago Report

It's an eye

Posted by bela 1 year ago Report

The dare. The clowning around. The friendly banter. Wait - is she digesting him?

Posted by Rat_Guy 1 year ago Report

Depends how you interpret it.

Posted by C107galaxytachyon 1 year ago Report

It alright if I admit I’m having a hard time properly visualizing the exact sequence of events going on in all this “mouth-play?”

Posted by Rat_Guy 1 year ago Report

Well, I'm describing a series of events that is impossible, so I'm not surprised if it's kinda hard to visualize some of the specifics.

Posted by C107galaxytachyon 1 year ago Report

You mean the fact she’s somehow kept him from inadvertently triggering her swallowing reflex as she’ constantly reorienting him within her mouth’s confines?

Posted by Rat_Guy 1 year ago Report

I meant the fact that she had a whole person in her mouth at once. I honestly can't picture some of it except in an abstract cartoony way.

Posted by C107galaxytachyon 1 year ago Report

Can you at least state whether or not he was EVER “fully” crammed into her cheeks/mouth, and for how long?

Posted by Rat_Guy 1 year ago Report

Yeah, I'll answer any questions. He was meant to be entirely contained inside her mouth from this line:

"Glen and Marcy were staring wide eyed at their friends, clearly lost for words. Tanya now had the bulk of an entire person stuffed between her distended lower jaw and her upper jaw, with cheeks several times wider than her shoulders."

Until she swallowed him. Sorry for any confusion. Maybe I'll re-write some of it.

Posted by C107galaxytachyon 1 year ago Report

Nah: it's completely fine.

I think I've just been kinda conditioned to not give THAT much thought to mawplay in general in the context of vore (and same-size vore, at that.)

Posted by C107galaxytachyon 1 year ago Report

On a semi-related note, would you say there’s ultimately not much more (if anything) worth adding to this in terms of drawing the whole process out, so-to-speak?

Posted by Rat_Guy 1 year ago Report

I don't think I quite understand your meaning. Are you asking if I could have been more descriptive in the story?

Posted by C107galaxytachyon 1 year ago Report

In the sense of her actually relishing in all that at least a “bit” more (whether inadvertently or otherwise), then yes.

If you’re talking about giving more POV-esque views of the participants involved, then I think I’m probably giving you the wrong idea here.

Posted by Rat_Guy 1 year ago Report

In my mind she did very little "relishing" other than wanting to prove herself right, and prove her friends wrong. Her actions were very impersonal, and after her remaining friends reassured her she mostly put the incident out of her mind. But this is only how I thought if as I was writing it, you can read into her behavior however you want.

Posted by C107galaxytachyon 1 year ago Report

So…

I take it you’d be hard pressed to actually drag things out longer than’s honestly needed to get the point across in this “enough” for most viewers’ liking?

Posted by Rat_Guy 1 year ago Report

It was never meant to be much more than a superficial story, more about the scenario than the characters. Sorry if you found it to be lacking.

Posted by Rat_Guy 1 year ago Report

If you wanted to remix it or sequelize it, you may do so with my blessing.

Posted by R_U_Snacksize 1 year ago Report

I love the mouth play! Part of me wants her to digest him, possibly after he tells her she can't meaning he doesn't want her to do so but she takes it as a challenge and does it.

Posted by Rat_Guy 1 year ago Report

The woman she is based on would definitely take that as a challenge, or would simply wanna give it a try upon learning it was an option just because it might be fun for her.

Posted by rugli 9 months ago Report

I say this one clearly needs a follow up I have and idea if you are intrested.

Posted by Rat_Guy 9 months ago Report

I'm always curious to hear what people are thinking about my stuff. So yeah, if you want me to know then I'd be happy to hear it.

I probably won't write a follow-up, but if you feel like writing your own sequel based on my story, please feel free to do so with my blessing.