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Self control in the face of hormones, emotions and instincts can make all the difference in a human's survival. Or, if you're a friendly predator, all the difference in the survival of your human best friend.

With Jack and Fiona finally starting to come back down to Earth (or whatever HNTBL planet this is), they find there's still a fair bit of mess to deal with. They had to start confronting things sooner or later.

Happy Vore Day everyone! Here's... a story with no real vore ^^;
Okay, listen, I don't plan these out. You're lucky I had anything to upload for vore day. Consider this my way of balancing out all the "EAT EVERYONE" Vore Day content (which I love), with some plot-y, emotional content. If the way to a 's heart is through their stomach, than aren't emotions like this the true meaning of Vore Day? ...No...? Well, I tried. Go enjoy the story anyway.

This emotional rollercoaster of a series is being created in collaboration with  x9comega. If you're wondering how Jack has avoided becoming lunch for 64 whole chapters and counting, you can read the full series here:
https://aryion.com/g4/view/569713

And, if you're interesting in chatting with the creators of the series, and a bunch of other fans too, you're welcome to come hang out on the HNTBL Discord server:
discord.gg/3g8EmEjmnF

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Wolfsage

Posted by Wolfsage 1 year ago Report

Damn, I just sat down for dinner, and what do I find? This is nice. And fitting :D

ShadowDM

Posted by ShadowDM 1 year ago Report

Great chapter. I really enjoyed it, despite the lack of noms and lack of Jack being in a belly(Sissy's).

I love the way they try to work through everything together. And I love how much they care for eachother.

The emotional parts of this story are equally good to the vore parts. And they make this one of the best and most unique stories I read on the internet.

Wolfsage

Posted by Wolfsage 1 year ago Report

Well, now that they are at Fiona's house, there is a chance for Sissy to show up soon. And maybe, just maybe, the little pup will be lucky that Fiona is not in her room due to something occupying her time and she ends up alone with Jack :D

Shadow0000

Posted by Shadow0000 1 year ago Report

Finally. It's about time that they heal.

TheDragonBoy

Posted by TheDragonBoy 1 year ago Report

No kidding, right.

Shadow0000

Posted by Shadow0000 1 year ago Report

My only concern is that they left out Arthur's involvement with their discussions. They both knew that he was the one responsible for their fractured relationship, and the schemer who wanted to drive them away from each other.

Overall, I do hope that Jack gives her his full forgiveness soon.

CakePisces

Posted by CakePisces 1 year ago Report

Pretty much jack's thoughts were the audiences. The hot anger and frustration from us was represented well here. How that was resolved (a bit as a start) was written well here. Great chapter from both of you!

TheDragonBoy

Posted by TheDragonBoy 1 year ago Report

Thanks. I did try to lean into how (some of) our readers seemed to be feeling, because I thought it was a fitting view. Glad you liked it.

Perodian

Posted by Perodian 1 year ago Report

I wonder if Fiona will start to realize that Arthur wasn't just leading her to eat Jack, but his friends as well. He was the one who told Ozzy to shut up or die.

Shadow0000

Posted by Shadow0000 1 year ago Report

I do believe that they, both Fiona and Jack, knew that Arthur was the one pulling the strings on both of them. So I'd say that she'd come to that conclusion already, or she'll start reexamine Arthur's influence on her since their encounter.

wolfSnack

Posted by wolfSnack 1 year ago Report

This was amazing. Absolute top-tier emotional writing!

...and how dare you make me feel sad-horny again remember the Zach and Ruby vore? XD

TheDragonBoy

Posted by TheDragonBoy 1 year ago Report

Thanks! Gotta milk that sacrifice for every bit of good emotion it’s got.

Kasra

Posted by Kasra 1 year ago Report

Very sweet! They've finally learned to talk it all out rather than just holding it in.

'Course they ARE at Fiona's house, so in a few hours Sissy is liable to be an issue. But Fi's up to that particular challenge.

Wolfsage

Posted by Wolfsage 1 year ago Report

I hope that does happen. It's been a while since Sissy have been in the spotlight.

Kasra

Posted by Kasra 1 year ago Report

...Huh, you know, it just occurred to me. Sissy has eaten and then coughed up Jack before. Considering how hard it was for FIONA to do that, Sissy's self control must actually be ridiculously high.

Or she's just that afraid of her mother's displeasure.

Wolfsage

Posted by Wolfsage 1 year ago Report

Sissy was forced to it. First but her mother, then by Fiona, she didn't do it willingly.
Fiona did.

alockwood1

Posted by alockwood1 1 year ago Report

Interesting.

2Ron2R

Posted by 2Ron2R 1 year ago Report

A non-vore voreday story. XD

As others have said nice to see them finally talking things out. It's only around two weeks in world of course since #15 (when the issue of them not talking things out first emerged) but in our world it's been well over a year and a half (and 49 stories). It's been a long haul! XD

TheDragonBoy

Posted by TheDragonBoy 1 year ago Report

Yeah, don't I know it. Would be nice if I could get these out faster, but I'm happy the pace has been steady at least. Also, you're dead on with the timing; 12 days by my count since #15.

VincentRamone

Posted by VincentRamone 1 year ago Report

This was a good addition. Glad they're talking about things and handling their issues.

Daduke

Posted by Daduke 1 year ago Report

In a way a little bit of Zach and Ruby hugged Jack too.

TheDragonBoy

Posted by TheDragonBoy 1 year ago Report

That is all kinds of twisted and I love it.