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This is my first story in a while, and I'll just say up front that this one probably isn't for everyone. It isn't a very "fun" story, and it deals with some pretty rough themes and heavy concepts. I wanted to try to implement vore into a more "realistic" world, and have people react to the idea accordingly. Sensitive readers beware!
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Posted by Plgc 1 year ago Report
Love it so much! Would love to read more from this world
Posted by tummyterrors 1 year ago Report
Thanks a bundle! I like the concept enough that I probably will revisit it sometime
Posted by VigorousJazzHands 1 year ago Report
I'm usually all for this kind of "realistic" approach to vore, and as is usual of your work this is really well excecuted, but after reading I can't help but just feel sad, not turned on. Of course that seems to have been what you were going for, so you've definitely suceeded in making something emotionally effective.
Posted by tummyterrors 1 year ago Report
It's definitely a bummer, sorry about that. I really appreciate the compliments though! I was trying to stretch my writing legs~
Posted by Cobbly 1 year ago Report
Ah, so delightfully fucked. I second plgc, seeing more of this setting would be a treat.
Posted by tummyterrors 1 year ago Report
Many thanks~ I very likely will do more with this universe
Posted by MultipleCacti 1 year ago Report
You gotta appreciate the amount of thought you must have put into this. I really enjoyed how you made sure to flesh out the characters before you let them tear into each other (Or just Gary really lol). The world building section is also real nice: compact, but still gets us everything we need to know.
Going for a 'realistic' approach is always a little bit of a gamble, but I think you pulled it off nicely!
Posted by tummyterrors 1 year ago Report
Thank you so much! I was pretty pleased with it :)
Posted by Justsomeone 1 year ago Report
I really enjoyed this!
Posted by tummyterrors 1 year ago Report
I’m glad to hear it~
Posted by Schrodinger123 1 year ago Report
So are there there by rebel factions and if so how do they fight I’d say cancer patients wearing sodium bombs is a good trick if you’re wondering the idea would be that they would wear essentially a tin can full of metallic sodium which as soon as it gets in contact with either a large amount of water or the hydrochloric acid in a persons stomach would proceed to react very very fast having seen what it does I’m pretty sure it would proceed to either set them on fire from the inside better for a public show or cause them to explode your thoughts on these tactics