Posted by Nalzindar 1 year ago Report

This was wonderful and fantastic to behold, I felt like a child in a candy store from the moment I began reading :D
I didn't expect such a long finale, and especially not one that yet has to be concluded so I am thrilled to know that the final showdown is yet to occur.

Xenos is very much in character and you have gloriously managed to capture his personality, and to me it seems that you did an equally great job with Draken, even including their respective preferred type of prey. Their friendly banter and especially Draken's ability to take notice of compromising documents was perfectly executed and highly amusing in my view : )

I also found the special rules set by the golden dragons to be very interesting and their morality about which kind of maidens to eat, rather amusing. The arguments presented in this story seems almost similar to how a lawyer would have put forth in a case, to bad for the girls that their defenses are rather lacking and of questionable morality XD

As always, it was a delight to read your story and it makes me eager see what more your imagination will grace us with: )

Posted by PrinnyDood 1 year ago Report

Thank you! Glad I was reasonably on-point with Xenos and Draken.

The Gold Dragons are probably a case of my D&D past showing, with the 'lawful good' dragons, though it might be argued that they are a bit uncompromising and draconian in the standard they hold delicious maidens to. x3

The final bit won't be as long as this, but hopefully a worthy finish to this long-running series.

Posted by DrakentheBlack 1 year ago Report

I was unsure if Draken would use any of his powers to outwit the girls, but given his history, it makes sense that he'd know a thing or two about the underhanded actions a school of magic might practice. And I totally appreciate the fact that he was targeting the red heads ^^

I also got a kick out of the golden dragons showing up to try to defend the innocent, only to find there was no one matching that description. It gave a bit Sodom and Gomorrah theme to this chapter!

I love the bondage, and giving a weapon that can cast it at a distance to deliver bound and gagged meals for a dragon to eat at their leisure was very much enjoyable!

Posted by PrinnyDood 1 year ago Report

Yeah, I ended up going with something relatively straightforward for Draken's contribution, since I felt it fit with the themes in place.

Glad you enjoyed the gold dragons, and their considerable shift in priorities. xD

Posted by Jack 1 year ago Report

That was outright awesome. If the last part will be as good as this - oh my gosh.

I took the release of Sorceress Showdown as an opportunity to read up on the previous parts (the link for Bathing Beauties might be wrong), and it certainly added to the joy of reading this story. It is great!

I am not entirely sure, but can it be that the offenses of the academy refer to other stories you have previously written? The one about the elves and the swamp witches for example reminded me of A Feast For Frogs. Coincidence, or intentional?

Posted by PrinnyDood 1 year ago Report

Thanks! The final part won't be quite this long, but hopefully it will provide a satisfying conclusion to the series.

Glad you liked binging the series (and you're right, that link it wrong. Gotta fix).

Yes, that's a very good memory you've got there - several of those were indeed reference to previous stories, with A Feast For Frogs being the foremost. (Kinda wanted to write a follow-up of that one for a while, where an entire kingdom of conquered elf-girls are fed to giant frogs . . . xD)

Posted by Nalzindar 1 year ago Report

I didn't think to comment on the part where the academy's previous offences were brought up, but since Jack (above) mentioned it.....
Yes, I did also notice the comment on the elves who were fed to the frogs, including a few others, and found it suspiciously familiar when thinking about it in retrospective. I love the way you so cleverly managed to insert these previous happenings into a wider context in this story^^

Posted by wolfSnack 1 year ago Report

I loved the two Gold dragons! Especially the way they clearly cared for each other, and offered each other romantic meals ;)

Posted by wolfSnack 1 year ago Report

> Without further explanation, the underbelly of the gold dragoness turned gradually translucent. In just a few moments, Beatrix could see inside quite clearly . . . a shifting, gyrating tangle of naked, slime-coated female bodies. Straining and squirming, their muffled, plaintive cries barely reaching her ears... Rhythmic, rolling contractions squeezed the tangle of beautiful, naked women periodically, causing them to squirm and mewl all the more desperately, as the slime gushed and rolled between their supple, straining bodies.

This was also a GREAT addition, I loved this detail :3

Posted by PrinnyDood 1 year ago Report

I'm glad you liked that aspect! I've become quite a fan of that 'translucent stomach preview' type thingy. :3

Posted by PrinnyDood 1 year ago Report

Thanks! I'm glad you approve of their addition here. They were fun to write, and a nice contrast to the other dragons . . . while still getting plenty of voreish action. x3

Posted by French_snack 1 year ago Report

Those gold dragons' morality seems just a tad self-serving! :D This was a lot of fun, anyway.

Posted by PrinnyDood 1 year ago Report

Haha, that's 100% true - there's absolutely a huge bias involved, though they'd never admit it. xD