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This is my first story after lurking on this site for years. C&C welcome, thank you for reading.

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VividLucidity

Posted by VividLucidity 7 days ago Report

For a first story, it was very good! There were a few mistakes here and there, but for the most part, you did well. You have definite promise; I hope you continue and grow better as you do so.

Good frog/toad on human vore is a bit rare to find, so I'm glad you wrote this.