Oh, cool. The first story was great but I really wanted to see more. This is a fantastic continuation, very imaginative and the ending is just perfect. I hope it isn't the final installment... that teacher still has to get home afterall.
Thanks for writing it!
What? I've got a FAN?! (faints and wastes all his limited internet minutes)
Seriously, thanks. You have no idea how awesome it is to get a comment... let alone one that's a compliment.
As for the story, it was a request from Omega for one of the shark-girls to escape, because he REALLY wanted the teacher, Shelley, to get to eat one of them. I just needed an excuse, and Jessika's genes supplied the perfect one. It wasn't even planned ahead.
As for Shelley not reaching her home... she's awful close to the community at this point (only Jessika's crushed throat prevented the smaller shark-girl from screaming for help).
Of course, anything's possible. In fact... yep, idea...
murrrrr! Thank you very much! Love Shelly, she's such a lovely pred and this is a great escape and capture. Glad you liked my suggestion and that it came out so remarkably well.
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Posted by Anonymous 19 years ago Report
Oh, cool. The first story was great but I really wanted to see more. This is a fantastic continuation, very imaginative and the ending is just perfect. I hope it isn't the final installment... that teacher still has to get home afterall. Thanks for writing it!
Posted by KavenBach 19 years ago Report
What? I've got a FAN?! (faints and wastes all his limited internet minutes) Seriously, thanks. You have no idea how awesome it is to get a comment... let alone one that's a compliment. As for the story, it was a request from Omega for one of the shark-girls to escape, because he REALLY wanted the teacher, Shelley, to get to eat one of them. I just needed an excuse, and Jessika's genes supplied the perfect one. It wasn't even planned ahead. As for Shelley not reaching her home... she's awful close to the community at this point (only Jessika's crushed throat prevented the smaller shark-girl from screaming for help). Of course, anything's possible. In fact... yep, idea...
Posted by Omega 19 years ago Report
murrrrr! Thank you very much! Love Shelly, she's such a lovely pred and this is a great escape and capture. Glad you liked my suggestion and that it came out so remarkably well.
Posted by KavenBach 19 years ago Report
Thanks, and you're welcome!