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A meticulous and mouth-watering murder victim By cheerfulchef -- Report

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A young man strives to convince his anti-vore activist friends that succulent boymeat is irresistible.

Written in collaboration with MrWar.

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DPMaster

Posted by DPMaster 2 weeks ago Report

I'm not typically a fan of whole body Dolcettish kind of stories, but this popped up on my feed under the "Castration" tag, so I checked it out. It was so well-written, I ready the whole story. I found it fun and entertaining. Again, it's not usually my thing, and it was a little bit of a letdown given my take on emasculation and castration is usually a lot more involved, but.. seriously good job. Thanks for taking the time.

cheerfulchef

Posted by cheerfulchef 13 days ago Report

Hm. That's good advice about using the castration tag responsibly. In the future, I'll make the nullification scene more pivotal to the story before labeling it as castration.

Btw, you should probably win an award for giving constructive feedback in the most positive, encouraging manner. Thanks DPMaster! :)

DPMaster

Posted by DPMaster 13 days ago Report

I'm not sure how pivotal it needs to be, but more significant to the protagonist, maybe. Just a comment a two about how he laments for their loss or is really excited to see them go as they go. It really wasn't meant so much as a criticism but as an explanation about how, even though the story wasn't typically something I'd enjoy, I really enjoyed it. :-)

KaiserDunk

Posted by KaiserDunk 13 days ago Report

Interesting reverse of the usual world-building behind a Dolcettish society.