hm...because before i saw a blond girl in light blue clothes and she already unbirth someone...i guess it was someone else.hope u make more unbirth stories
Well maybe you can make a sequal to this story with the creators permishion like something happens to Monica while she in Heather like regression. Another could be that after the trial is over she heads back to Heathers home and begs to return into Heather womb since she loved being in there.
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Posted by Anime-chan 19 years ago Report
you finally write UB! WOW! This was awesome! DO MORE! I BEG YOU!
Posted by TW 17 years ago Report
I have more planned. Don't worry, It is coming. ^^
Posted by TW 17 years ago Report
Also, I am sorry for not getting back to you sooner. I am still getting used to the New portal layout.
Posted by Anonymous 19 years ago Report
It was very good. The next work is expected.
Posted by TW 17 years ago Report
Thank you. I plan on more soon
Posted by jacquelope 18 years ago Report
Hah! This is the other side of the whole unbirth police thing: protection instead of incarceration. Awesome!
Posted by TW 17 years ago Report
Thank you. Yeah, it was an odd idea I had.
I apologize for not responding to you sooner. I am still learning the new layout of the portal.
Posted by max123 17 years ago Report
cool story.hope u continue it.but wasn`t there a pic with this story before?
Posted by TW 17 years ago Report
I don't think there was ever a picture for this. ^_^
Thanks for reading. :D
Posted by max123 17 years ago Report
hm...because before i saw a blond girl in light blue clothes and she already unbirth someone...i guess it was someone else.hope u make more unbirth stories
Posted by TW 17 years ago Report
I do not think it was mine. :) Though i wish it was.
I plan on writing another Unbirth story eventually.
Posted by ShadowInukara 17 years ago Report
Well maybe you can make a sequal to this story with the creators permishion like something happens to Monica while she in Heather like regression. Another could be that after the trial is over she heads back to Heathers home and begs to return into Heather womb since she loved being in there.
Posted by TW 17 years ago Report
Considering I'm the creator, I don't have to ask permission. :D
I highly doubt I'll do a follow up to this particular story.
Posted by ShadowInukara 17 years ago Report
Well can I do a follow up?
Posted by TW 17 years ago Report
Feel free. Just make sure you post in your description where you got the idea and PM me with a link to the finished product so I can read it too!
Posted by ShadowInukara 17 years ago Report
Sure thing I'll have it done next wekk probably since I have school work to do.
Posted by TW 17 years ago Report
No rush. :D I'm glad it inspired you to want to write more!
Posted by bdgfksfsgfbs321 17 years ago Report
Will you be writing it soon?
Posted by ShadowInukara 17 years ago Report
Already started it and I'm out of school so it should be finished in a week because I have fan fic stories to write.
Posted by bdgfksfsgfbs321 17 years ago Report
Will you be posting it soon?
Posted by ShadowInukara 16 years ago Report
I'm having trouble putting the second story together. School's really bugging me right now.
Posted by TW 16 years ago Report
No worries. Just finish it as you have time. :)
Posted by dragonfred 16 years ago Report
I hope to see more of this!