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The evaluation By Mark45 -- Report

Another commission done for  Max123.

Iack's internship is about to be over, and so is his girlfriend's. But it appears it may not end the way they both intended.

A big thank you to Max123 for this commission and the support.

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LemonBarb

Posted by LemonBarb 2 weeks ago Report

All I can say is, if there was a sequel. Hack will likely join his girlfriend, as teachers fat. While she taunts that he'd be lucky if he joins Matilde once she's done with him.

thekeymanwho

Posted by thekeymanwho 2 weeks ago Report

Finally a non-fatal girlfriend prey story. Don’t get me wrong I love the fatal girlfriend prey but I really love the non-fatal story’s more. Hopefully if you ever decide to make a sequel by any chance you can make it non-fatal?

thekeymanwho

Posted by thekeymanwho 2 weeks ago Report

Or perhaps a full tour end?

LemonBarb

Posted by LemonBarb 2 weeks ago Report

I'm more inclined for "permament entrapment" or intestine absorption, over it being a digestion story if it ever get's a sequel.

But eh, wait and see on how Jack's fucked. If a sequel's ever written/commissioned/etc.

Mark45

Posted by Mark45 2 weeks ago Report

Thank you! Glad you liked the story. ^^

To be honest, I can't say for sure if there will be a sequel nor how it will turn out. LemonBarb here and I are currently discussing about it.

Emperor_Palpatine

Posted by Emperor_Palpatine 2 weeks ago Report

Well done! I love it!

Mark45

Posted by Mark45 2 weeks ago Report

Thank you! ^^