Page 1: The big 1-9 (Refinement attempt)
Hello everyone, Mr. Hidden here.
As everyone may have noticed, I have changed the title of the original story to include communal and this whole new area for the story.
My general plan and why I’m doing this?
To be blunt, I am disappointed in some of my choices with the other version of the story. Mainly how I formatted, wrote some of the characters, getting lost in pathing, and a bunch of small things that just built up over time.
For that I want to apologize for and I figured writing short stories on the side would help clear some fog. It did a little, but not the way I intended for it. I’ve taken some time away and I feel like I’ve gotten a little better with writing during this time away.
Plans for the previous version?
I plan on keeping it up and maybe adding a few things here or there. But my priority will be with this version here. I will leave it open because I like a lot of the pages people have added and hell, if you want to toss something up in there, have at it, as long as it follows the rules I posted at the beginning and be overall respectful to one another. I will leave a link to the original at the bottom and vice versa.
I apologize for any confusion, disappointment, and surprise with this sudden news. But I feel the urge to start again, and show that I haven’t abandoned this story. I might be a minute between updates, but I hope that whatever I add will at least be of decent quality.
Original interactive story here.
With that, you all have a good one. Do not hesitate to tell me your thoughts, and I’ll see you around.
As everyone may have noticed, I have changed the title of the original story to include communal and this whole new area for the story.
My general plan and why I’m doing this?
To be blunt, I am disappointed in some of my choices with the other version of the story. Mainly how I formatted, wrote some of the characters, getting lost in pathing, and a bunch of small things that just built up over time.
For that I want to apologize for and I figured writing short stories on the side would help clear some fog. It did a little, but not the way I intended for it. I’ve taken some time away and I feel like I’ve gotten a little better with writing during this time away.
Plans for the previous version?
I plan on keeping it up and maybe adding a few things here or there. But my priority will be with this version here. I will leave it open because I like a lot of the pages people have added and hell, if you want to toss something up in there, have at it, as long as it follows the rules I posted at the beginning and be overall respectful to one another. I will leave a link to the original at the bottom and vice versa.
I apologize for any confusion, disappointment, and surprise with this sudden news. But I feel the urge to start again, and show that I haven’t abandoned this story. I might be a minute between updates, but I hope that whatever I add will at least be of decent quality.
Original interactive story here.
With that, you all have a good one. Do not hesitate to tell me your thoughts, and I’ll see you around.

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