Hello everyone, I have recently posted a new story and would like to get some critiques on it if you have the time.
Here is the story link, I hope you enjoy
fatal, willing, digestion, feral snake pred, human prey, casual vore
https://aryion.com/g4/view/983526
LSD and Retic Story
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