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Two futas tag team a foreign exchange student, but one of them. . . has other plans.
8-8-19 Dump 5/5.
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Posted by DRayElliott 4 years ago Report
Definitely prefer the optional ending. After all, if they're not dead and enjoyed themselves, that means that they can do it more than once.
Posted by TwrchTwryth 4 years ago Report
Exactly. I really agonized over whether to make this fatal (sexily casual disregard of life) or non-fatal (fun and we can do it again). I decided to give the reader the option.
Posted by Onewingedangel 4 years ago Report
There’s a slightly strange break in the mindset here where one paragraph the main character is not assuming she has a right to fuck the other herms ass, and then like two paragraphs later she’s digesting her without even blinking. As always, your writing is fantastic but thought I’d mention it anyways, as it totally broke me out of headspace.
Posted by TwrchTwryth 4 years ago Report
I guess she sees the transgression of sexual boundaries as more troublesome than the predation. Y'know, the sex is meant to be fun and consensual, the vore is all about Aoi's desires. But I see your point.
Posted by UnbirthLover 4 years ago Report
Keep the optional ending as a continuation opening. Would love to see more of these characters.
Posted by TwrchTwryth 4 years ago Report
I might. I have an idea for another one of Aoi's friends, but we'll have to see.