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What do you do when it feels so wrong but hurts so good?
What do you do when you've attracted...attention?
Are the police your biggest problem, after winning the eating contest?
Some lines are not so casually crossed.
Posted by Yumyum18 1 year ago Report
Hope that the cult who WANT to feed our baby goddess find her first
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Posted by rugosian 1 year ago Report
Getting there is half the fun… all I’ll say is her enemies seriously outnumber her friends, and are also able to move more freely.
But hey, what’s a predator anti-heroine without a prey-rich environment?
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Posted by OofKing124 1 year ago Report
This was all way too confusing lol
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Posted by rugosian 1 year ago Report
I thought about that when writing it. As an author, it’s tough to bring readers up to speed in a story world. I’m trying to ride the line between info-dumping and having things just happen for no apparent reason. This is my “practice” and that’s why I want your feedback!
As a story, Elizabeth “Marie” is supposed to be confused at this point. She’s gone from being a freakishly hungry big eater, to something beyond. Her life has just gone from concealably weird to unconcealably so. Also, weird shit is happening to her, from a whole array of unexpected abilities to the mysterious “Mother” in her dreams. She’s always dreamed of a real mother… but is this what she prayed for? All she can think to do is run for it and try to buy time.
The ritual magical significance of vore in the story world is large. The summary is that she’s basically set off all the mystical alarms around the world, in every magic-aware agency or wizardly sect - including, importantly, that of her “kindred.” Who are only tolerated because they’re really good at devouring other kinds of magical evil, and only so long as they only eat proven bad guys.
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