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Trending in Mommy’s Dashboard By Fatedmeal -- Report

Summary: Has Eka’s Portal's new Trending Dashboard affected your relationship with your mother and your childhood crush.

Word Count: 8997

Author’s Notes: Happy 20th Anniversary Eka’s Portal! I know this is a little belated, but I wasn’t expecting this anniversary and wanted to pump out quality story for the weekend.

I wasn’t completely comfortable writing a fictional work of someone’s likeness. So I defaulted to writing a story focused on one of the newest implementations on Eka’s Portal during this anniversary. The Trending Dashboard.

Please let me know what you thought of the story in the comments section below. Your comments help this community thrive, and here’s to hoping that it will continue to for the next twenty years.

Thumbnail Reference: https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=6522143&tags=milf+solo+original++tongue_out+

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Blackheartedreaper2

Posted by Blackheartedreaper2 8 days ago Report

Nice story, love yandere preds

Fatedmeal

Posted by Fatedmeal 8 days ago Report

Thanks. I like them too. Thus…we have this story.

BazBackup

Posted by BazBackup 8 days ago Report

I suspect sooner or later he's going to end up in her too...

Fatedmeal

Posted by Fatedmeal 8 days ago Report

That is one way that Raya can ensure that her honey never leaves her side, but that sounds like the “nuclear option”. I think she’ll try a cast wipe first of the neighborhood harem before trying that.

BazBackup

Posted by BazBackup 7 days ago Report

True, but it would be a nice 'cap' to it, especially with sentient fat or something similar =3

Fatedmeal

Posted by Fatedmeal 7 days ago Report

You aren’t wrong.

Eka

Posted by Eka 8 days ago Report

I'm surprised there are writers in on this, I was just thinking there are no one who is gonna do anything like that, but hey...

Fatedmeal

Posted by Fatedmeal 8 days ago Report

Thanks a lot for the comment, Eka. I appreciate it. :-).

pbysteria

Posted by pbysteria 8 days ago Report

Some lovely descriptions of the digestive stage where a lot of action happens relatively shortly. I was a bit confused for what orientation the lap resting occured, but such an intimate perspective to a destructive process happening so closely was a treat

Fatedmeal

Posted by Fatedmeal 8 days ago Report

Thanks for the comment.

Yeah. It’s always a whirlwind trying to pack in as many juicy details as possible and not bloat the word count too much.

As for the “lap pillow” scene. It isn’t really a lap pillow. At that point Raya’s belly was probably half the size of a human and only the ends of her knees would be peeking out. Honey was initially sitting next to Raya, on the spot of the couch she patted, then they lowered themselves on one of their sides onto the squishing half-done of a tubby mattress.

Raya used the words “lap pillow” as that is what she gave her honey in the past. It’s a familiar term and the mother expected her child to catch on to what she was implying and be able to promptly follow through with her request. As opposed to if she said “belly pillow” which is something honey would not be familiar with and caused them to pause.

I hope this comment was helpful and also serves to show the thought Raya puts behind her actions.

As it perpetuates the overall theme in this story. How “competition can be conducive but also has its own share of failings” and why I chose to write this narrative for the 20th anniversary.

pbysteria

Posted by pbysteria 8 days ago Report

Ah that does clear up my reading of it. It is a lovely dynamic between the two, and her tying together the past and present in such ways is very well thought out.

Fatedmeal

Posted by Fatedmeal 8 days ago Report

I guess I should also mention a specific spot where honey’s head was resting. Approximately near Raya’s navel.

The rigidness of the rotund circumference was already giving away. Allowing for their head to sink into the mother’s warm pudginess. A simple roll of honey’s head would position their visual field underneath the stretch of the parent’s mammary glands, which were now protruding relatively farther because of the progressive sinking of honey’s headrest.

I’m typing this all out relying on my memory and not looking at the text of the story, but I hope this helps paint a visual of what that particular scene looked like.