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Kathy is on a regular run with Shelly, her giant, friendly Saint Bernard. But oh no! It seems like Kathy forgot to pack the dog treats!
Will Shelly have to finish the rest of the route hungry, or will she be able to scrounge up something?
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Hey, I've decided to take a little break from the Camp Churnthorn stories for a little to work on some shorter stories. Thanks for reading, and like always, helpful critique is always welcome!
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Posted by Cynder13 11 months ago Report
So I loved the part with Kathy and the mother and how normal it was while Tim was begging for help and I loved that the mother ultimately decided Tim’s fate will we see Kathy and the in other stories?
And sallys plan is succeeding
Posted by TheGreatest1986 11 months ago Report
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed!
I'm not sure if we'll ever see Kathy in the other stories, this is more of a one shot.
But I definitely plan on writing stories where we see Sally's and Cassandra's plans coming to fruition.
Posted by Yumyum18 11 months ago Report
Good dog
And thank you Mum for letting your son take his rightful place in Shelly belly
Posted by TheGreatest1986 11 months ago Report
A very good dog!
And Mom always knows best, after all! In this case, Mom knew her son was better off as dog food.
Posted by FauxSlime 11 months ago Report
Your writing is very well done and I enjoyed the story immensely.
I do suggest grabbing a thesaurus as it as saved me from repeating words and enlarging my vocabulary. I use a thesaurus constantly for this reason and have launched my writing to new heights and I think it would do the same for you!~ <3
Keep up the excellent work! I love big, slobbery, feral dogs; especially Saint Bernards.
Posted by BazBackup 11 months ago Report
I'd love to see Shelly get a willing meal