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I've been working on writing a lot more recently so I decided to upload my first earnest attempt at this sort of thing. Let me know what you think? Apologies for the thumbnail, I draw some but it's pretty mediocre so I figured if I zoomed in enough it wouldn't make a difference.
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Posted by Plaidegenerate 11 months ago Report
It was certainly an interesting read, the idea of using vore and reformation as a beauty regiment isn't a very common prompt but it deserves more attention. The writing itself is very well done, easy to read and creative enough to keep it interesting. I hope to see more of your work!
Was the use of "Ms" instead of "Mrs" intended as a character preference or did you mix the terms by mistake?
Posted by Monstin 11 months ago Report
Thanks for the nice comment! Glad you enjoyed the story. Reformation is a topic I think about frequently because I'm not as in to the crueler side of vore.
The use of Ms. vs Mrs. is an interesting topic but I'll try to keep it brief. I used Ms. for Ms. Timber because it is often used as a professional title to obscure marriage status entirely. While technically Ms. Timber could be referred to as Mrs. Timber and there would be no trouble, the women working at the clinic are meant to be seen as purely professionals. Long story short, yes it was a character preference and will probably persist if I write in this setting more.
Posted by Plaidegenerate 11 months ago Report
I always forget about the occupational use of "Ms". Lol
You're right, that mistake was on me.