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james's at home trying to work but his step sis has differend plans
let me know how much this story suchs and how i can improve it in the comments down belowe,
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Posted by Yumyum18 10 months ago Report
Such a good stepsister.
Brother deserves a good meal
Posted by BelovedSkull 10 months ago Report
Yep you need to know how to help overworked or depressed familie
Posted by Kapitantorrento 10 months ago Report
I like stories in which "Pred became prey" but I prefer it not to be on a voluntary basis. Let the self-confident Preds feel their own medicine to their surprise.
Posted by BelovedSkull 10 months ago Report
Hey if you want to I’ve done a picture series of it over on Deviant art, also in the speed test story there’s some as well
Posted by Xenophage17 10 months ago Report
Love sibling stuff and always appreciate a disposal reference
Posted by BelovedSkull 10 months ago Report
I try to get more into it, right now it’s just bones but who knows where I’ll go in the future
Posted by Xenophage17 10 months ago Report
No worries, your the writer so make sure you only write what you enjoy and are comfortable with.
Posted by BelovedSkull 10 months ago Report
thanks, if you read my early story's (not recomended) you can see me ether skipping over it or just saying that all of the human body gets turned into boob/but fat or muscles and dick lengeth in male cases, but i wanted to go for someting that's more realistic (as realistic as i can)
Posted by Xenophage17 10 months ago Report
Yeah I can absolutely understand people not being into the lower exit. Personally very much enjoy so I do like to outline it. But also don't want to make an artist uncomfortable. So hope I didn't do that.
Posted by BelovedSkull 10 months ago Report
Oh no no don’t worry, there was nothing to make one unconvertible with these comments, don’t worry
Posted by Whereaminow27 4 months ago Report
Wish this was Continued with the Mother.
Posted by BelovedSkull 4 months ago Report
Who knows I might just do that, when i start this serie again